In the future to eat melon, it is recommended to follow this format

Two days ago, the people of the country were immersed in the sweet interaction between Wang Bingbing and Xu Jiayu. Today, the friends of Xu Jiayu's ex -girlfriend Tu Du suddenly posted a post, telling the story of a less pleasant breakup from Xu Jiayu.

The amount of likes sent by the soil on the soil has reached 1.52 million

We have no intention of evaluating the right and wrong, but in just 12 hours, the soil can have so much support, which has a lot to do with the excellent writing of this article.

On the first page of the screenshot of Weibo, friends of the parties directly used the paper format:

Simply and clear, clear and generous, this page is treasure. The fruit shell is learned with everyone here.

Thesis title

The title of this thesis is very academic. If you write "Let everyone see how this person is seamlessly connected" here, it is too straightforward.

The word "human love diversity" is not common. It not only improves the grade of the title, but also leaves enough suspense for readers to attract readers to continue reading. How is it diverse?

The title of thesis in real life is also higher. For example, the word snoring is not recommended to be used in the title. It is best to use obstructive sleep apnea and low ventilation syndrome. The effect is similar to "human love diversity". Essence

In addition, the term "observation and analysis" is also very neutral, but it is not so strong that the author has seen and hears the feeling of persuading readers. Like the homework of the ethnic history of anthropology, there are not many topics. It seems humble and natural, and the reader's favor has improved inadvertently.

Summary

Perhaps because the author is a medical student, the abstract of this literature is a structured summary, that is, the abstracts composed of four parts: instructions (background), methods, results, and discussion (conclusions).

Non -structured summary is often a long paragraph, and there are no clear parts of a clear part:

At present, the abstracts of most papers are non -structured abstracts, but in recent years, there have been many voices that use structured abstracts to replace non -structured abstracts. The reason is simple because it follows the writing structure of scientific papers, that is,:

Introduction: What is the theme? Why do you do this research?

Method: What method did you use to study the problem that the author cares about?

Results: What result did you draw according to the above method?

Discussion: What does the result mean? What does it have to do with others? What can I do in the future?

Wait four parts.

This mode is called Imrad (IMRODUCTION, METHODS, Results, and Discussion). After World War II, it quickly occupied the magazine version, until 40 years ago became the sole mode of all thesis.

The proportion of the IMRAD papers in major medical issues in major medical issues | References [1]

Not to mention Newton, Einstein's papers are not written according to the format of this paper, but it has become the absolute mainstream of the academic community. intuition.

Eating melon is eating stories. If you are not a novelist or playwright, you are afraid of telling your own story, then according to this structure, think about:

What do I want to say to you? Why do you say this? What method do I use and what evidence do I provide to support me? what's the result? What to do in the future?

First, a version of the summary. If you can rely on this direction, you can definitely increase the level of the Chinese melon world several grades. After all, such an article is standing on the same starting line as the academic frontier!

Key words

It is a pity that this article has no keywords, which is not good.

As a standardized paper, following the abstract, 3 to 8 keywords should be written below. In this way, the reader had a lot of heart to look at the beginning, and said far away that our descendants would be more convenient to search for this article.

In addition, if the author believes that this paper will be read worldwide, it is best to write keywords in Chinese and English texts to facilitate international friends to learn for reference.

The following is the content we suggest to add:

Keywords: break up, ex -girlfriend, human love diversity

Key Words: Breakup, Ex-GirlFriend, Human Romantic Relationship Diversity

One more thing: It is not recommended to use "turtle" as keywords, so as not to create unnecessary trouble for friends of the maintenance insurance and agricultural majors.

DOI

"Doi" is not "poisonous love", not "poisonous love", "DOI" is the English abbreviation of "digital object's only identification".

As a number of academic papers, Doi is equivalent to a person's ID: the number and the body correspond to one -to -one body. If you have a number, you can find the body. If you have the body, you must have a number.

Adding DOI to the hammer material can make the article more like an academic papers, add a lot of interest, as far as I have a superficial history of eating Gua, this is the first in this incident.

But attentive friends (maybe only me) can also find that this number is wrong: all DOI numbers start with "10" instead of "01".

This is the DOI 丨 References in Weibo [2] This is the DOI in the regular journal.

The registration agency code is composed, but the beginning is 10

Written as "01" may be an egg, "01.2019" may be the time when the soil and the small fish have just begun together. If not, please don't mix 0 and 1!

Issue

At the footer of each page of the paper, the word "New Shanghai Gourd Magazine" is marked, but the name of only academic journals is not enough. It should also show that this is the XX period of the journal XX year.

The original text does not show which year is this 丨 reference [2]

As a peer, when quoting this paper, it is necessary to have a period of publishing, author name, thesis title, publishing year, and period number before reference.

As a reader, I knew the number of periods before I knew whether there was still the next issue this year.

So, is there still the next issue this year?

chart

This is a icing on the cake. There are many materials for this hammer, but there is a little bit of stacking. Most of the problems are qualitative analysis and lack of quantitative summary.

There are a lot of data in life. For example, if the editor is weighed and took pictures every day, then we will have a lot of information about weight.

Of course, it is possible to put these numbers from one by one, but we can also make daily weight data into a line chart, so that readers can easily see from the ups and dying trend that editing this month is indeed fat.

Similarly, the data in this article will be more intuitive and greater if the data can be visualized.

Xiaoyu mentioned the frequency of "Bingbing", did it rise significantly within three months?

At different stages, will the number of small fish send messages account for significant changes in the total interaction between the two?

Using text emotional analysis, is there a significant difference in the attitude of small fish before and after breaking up?

There is room for improvement, and it can also provide reference for the people who eat the emotional problems. Perhaps friends who put the hammer in the future can learn from it.

references

This is actually not a reference. It is a reference material, but it is already good to list the source of reference! The reference in the paper is generally long:

Taking the APA format as an example, the reference to the article consists of the author, year, title, source, period number number, page number and other parts.

The most important reason must be listed in academics. The most important reason is that it is convenient for your leadership, your mentor, your colleagues, and your readers to verify the authenticity of what you say, and provide arguments for what you say.

It is a pity that many online proof and scolding wars do not have this. There is a sense of floating. This is not good. If you can summarize the source of the data like this, it will make readers more convinced and let neutral swingers stand on you on you. On one side.

Discussion and outlook

It can be said that this time the melon is clear, and it has enough interest, and has a natural sense of humor.

At present, there are only one party. It is difficult for us to judge who is right and who is wrong, and we cannot understand the full picture of the incident. Therefore, this article only explores the skills and innovations of copywriting writing, including title, abstract, keywords, DOI, period numbers, charts, references, etc. In terms of, it also provides the direction that can be used for reference and improvement.

It is not critical to follow the above suggestions. The most important thing is to tell your story with the appropriate structure and language, and don't let yourself be ugly.

references

[1]Sollaci, L. B., Pereira, M. G. (2004). The introduction, methods, results, and discussion (IMRAD) structure: a fifty-year survey. Journal of the medical library association, 92(3), 364.

[2]新上海瓜瓜杂志，很多打不出来的emoji，土土（通讯作者），有关人类恋爱多样性的观察分析一例，新上海瓜瓜杂志，无年份，无期号

[3] The writing format of scientific and technical reports, degree papers and academic papers (GB-7713-87), National Standards Bureau

Author: Li Xiaokui, Su Seven Years

Edit: LUNA, Odette

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