2022 The title of Shenzhen High School Entrance Examination Talks about "Beyond yourself", how to write it?Famous teacher to answer

With the ringtone of the first discipline of the first discipline of the Shenzhen High School Entrance Examination on June 26, the ringtone of the ringtone of the Shenzhen High School Entrance Examination was announced in 2022. The test questions were:

"You let me surpass your usual self", except for poetry, the style is not limited, 600-900 words.

Can this composition question be written? How to review the question? How to start? Please listen to what the famous master says:

Comment on composition questions:

The longest full proposition title in the history of Shenzhen Chinese Chinese Entrance Examination

"You let me go beyond your usual yourself", full proposition, 12 words, the longest and full proposition title in the history of Shenzhen Chinese Chinese Entrance Examination. This title will make students from 2022 feel familiar, warm, feel the same, and feel "good"!

There are "I" and "I", and what else is more familiar than "I"? "Growth" is an eternal theme. It has long been familiar and familiar. During the epidemic period, in the days when countless lonely fighting rooms and the eyes of teachers and classmates, it was "you" warmed my heart and inspired me to walk in the direction with the greatest resistance. The 11 million students overcome countless difficulties and walked more than a thousand days to watch the "new crown" face. At this moment, they read wisdom and kindness, warmth and rationality from the composition questions. Suddenly excited and excited, suddenly bloody. Facing the mood, a wonderful pen.

The subjects have the following main characteristics:

The first is diverse elements. "Yes", "you", "let me", "beyond", "", "usual" and "self." Seven elements should not be ignored. Unlike "transcendence"; unlike "I transcend myself"; different from "I have surpassed myself"; different from "I have surpassed my usual self"; different from "you let me surpass your usual self". "You let me surpass my ordinary self", twelve words, word beads, no "idle" word. The grasp of "elements" will be different in the reflection of questions and selection of materials. Pay special attention to "yes" and "". "I" is a tense assistant, and it is to complete the tense. "Yes" even if it is omitted, it does not affect the integrity of grammar, but it weakens the tone and weakens the role of "you". It is certain that the positioning of "you" and the understanding of "" will be the key to standing out.

The second is the relationship. "You", "I", and "yourself" are related, lacking. "I" from "ordinary me" to "unusual me", related. In the specific process of "transcendence", "you" and "you" have achieved the final goal with "I". These associations, not writing clearly, will affect the first.

Each grass will bloom, maybe phoenix flowers, golden phoenix flowers, kapok, or Jiulixiang, sage, and chrysanthemum. "You" is the sun, air and water.

Who is the "you" that allows "I" to surpass "I"? What is it?

(About the author: Zhang Hong, a senior teacher in Luohu Foreign Language in Luohu, a senior teacher in Luohu District Famous Teacher Studio, a part -time teaching and research staff in Shenzhen Chinese.)

Student's speech:

Chen Hongjie, a student of Cuiyuan Dongxiao Middle School (6), handed over half an hour in advance. He said that for him, the Chinese test in the morning is not difficult, the overall is relatively smooth, and the composition is relatively easy. In terms of learning, write how to surpass yourself.

After the Chinese test in the morning, Xu Zichuan, the third grade of the junior high school of Shenzhen Experimental School, discussed the topic of Chinese composition with his mother Li Ying. The mother and daughter each expressed their views on the composition. The child told how she wrote it. The mother Li Ying thought that this composition question was better to write. As the third grade candidate, there should be many perceptions in the process of preparing for the exam during this year's epidemic situation. You can write into the composition. This "you" can be someone else or the candidate himself. The students have something to say. The third day of the first (6) Pan Jingyi said that the exam is not difficult, and the Chinese topic is very simple. She wrote the help of her friends' help to herself, and she can write more true feelings. After the school, Zi Jie, the third (3) of the school, picked up the younger sister who welcomed her. He wrote the story of a takeaway brother when he was in a bad spirit. He gave himself a stories that inspired himself. The overall feeling was very good. He was full of confidence in the next few subjects.

Zhang Zhitian, the third (3) of the Wende School of Luohu District, believes that this composition is relatively easy, which is much simpler than usual simulation volumes. He wrote from how he broke through his help and influence on his friends.

In the last ten years, Shenzhen High School Entrance Examination Title:

1. 2012: My world is beautiful because of you

2. 2013: My favorite word: ____

3. 2014: Happiness plus minus method

4. 2015: Go home

5. 2016: There is no ____ in my emoji package

6. 2017: My power source

7. 2018: Details of Shenzhen ____

8. 2019: Because of me

9. 2020: witness beauty

10. 2021: This creativity makes me excited

Reporter: Gu Rong Liu Mengjiao Ma Tao

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