Famous Master · Say 丨 Writing small animals is enough to have these four steps

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Yu Xiaohui, a rookie in the elementary and middle schools in Zhejiang Province, senior teacher, Qiantang District Discipline leader and backbone teacher. Actively write educational and teaching papers, and have won awards in papers at all levels many times. The writing case "Poetry and Painting Hangzhou -I am making a gift for the Asian Games" with the "Message of the Asian Games" was concentrated in the "Charming Winter vacation" activity plan organized by the Education and Research Office of Zhejiang Provincial Education Department and was selected as an excellent plan.

It is generally difficult for us to refuse cute little animals, such as common chickens, cats, dogs and ducks, birds, beasts, fish and insects known as picture books or TVs. If you let you write these small animals, how can you write down, so that the small animals in your pen have the "living" power of life? Today we will talk about this topic.

Require the requirements of teaching materials: Write the characteristics of animals to grasp

If you want to write this kind of composition, you must first understand the textbooks, clarify the specific requirements of different grades, and follow the footsteps of the textbook.

The lower grades about small animals are more of the characteristics of giving animals. For example, the "Animal Kingdom Conference" and "Guru" are fairy tales. The words and deeds of small animals, personality, personality, ending, etc. tell children to be human. By the third and fourth grades, it is more focused on the habits and main characteristics of animal catch. Grade 56 textbooks should understand the basic explanation methods, and use different methods to introduce the characteristics and habits of animals, such as "Squirrel" and "Whale".

It is not difficult to see that no matter which stage writing small animals, it is required to write the characteristics of small animals.

Careful observation will describe: the appearance of the limbs of the facial features

To write small animals, you must get in touch with small animals at a close range, from the facial features to the limbs, and conduct a comprehensive and detailed observation, so as to write a small animal.

First of all, observe the overall characteristics, and simply propose a personality name. For example, in the article "My Snowball", the little author wrote "My family has raised a lot of cats, one of which is the most special. Everywhere is like a snowball rolling, I call it 'snowball'. "

With a few words, the overall characteristics of the cat have been explained clearly, which is impressive. In the same way, the small and exquisite and clever can be called "Doudou" and "Congcong". Naughty and troubled sports can be called "Taotao" and "Pippi" ... From the origin of the name, leave the reader an overall impression.

Secondly, observe the limbs of the facial features and highlight the typical characteristics. For example, the article "Seventy -two Change" ", the little author wrote:" My cat's king '"Vajrayana" of the king of the cat is soft, and the round meat pads at the bottom of the feet are like small round dots. Usually I usually me I like to touch the soles of its feet, soft, and do not tie their hands at all. However, when it is angry, grinning with teeth, one by one with a hook -like sharp claws quickly stretched out of the hair, waving, making life fear, a good one, a good one. 'Seventy -two changes'! At this time, I didn't even dare to approach it, for fear that the six relatives would hurt me by mistake ... "

The appearance characteristics of writing small animals cannot be fabricated for granted, nor are they all come to each other, but to spend time to observe and see the changes first, and pay attention to the different things. Aura "and" vitality ".

Dynamic and static combination to grasp the good: eat, drink, play, wash and write habits

When describing the shape of small animals, it is generally focused on static, and the habits of small animals should focus on dynamics. For example, how to eat and drink water, how to play and jump, how to take a bath and sleep, etc. "live".

For example, in the article "Xiaohuang of the His Family", the little author describes the appearance of the duckling when he is in the pool: "There is a pool at the door of the house next door, it is Xiaohuang's paradise. I saw a furry" The hydrangea "leaps into the pool, fluttering its wings, and then tie into the pool, take a sip, lifts his head, pout the mouth, throw his head slightly, and make the sound of 'quags, quag'. In the water, the water surface does not surface in the water for a long time, leaving only a sharp yellow tail on the surface to make a layer of ripples. It turns out that the duckling is drinking the water like this, it is really interesting! "

You see, how careful the little author's observation and description! In fact, as long as students pay attention to observing the habits of small animals, there will be many discovery.

For example, when the puppy saw a stranger at home, he looked like "like a big enemy" and "grinning teeth"; when he saw food, he drooling, spitting out a long tongue, and constantly sending out "suckha sucking haha" The sound and head follow the cuteness of the food. Write these in the composition, you can definitely write the cutest side of small animals.

Write fun things with tricks: See the truth in the details

How can I write the cuteness of small animals? Use metaphorical, anthropomorphic and other rhetoric methods, and seize the little animal to leave the most impressive and interesting details to write, express your true feelings, and the composition will become agile.

In the article "Pippi of Sports", the little author wrote "Pippi is the" sports athlete '' 'in the puppy industry'. You look at it, you can't bear the loneliness for a while, as long as it wakes up, in me, in me, in me The quiet time on the legs is absolutely no more than three minutes. Pippi's favorite sports is chasing the ball. As a "loyal fan ', I beg my mother to buy a beautiful new ball from time to time. That day When Pippi saw a new ball, she happily chased the ball around the living room ... The ball had nowhere to escape, so she had to roll into the sofa and hide!

At this time, Pippi is not right. After many hard work failed, it had to raise watery eyes to ask me for help.I pretended to ignore it, it was at my feet and screamed ... "In short, writing animals, remembering this trick: writing the characteristics of animals, the shape of the limbs of the facial features, the habit of eating, drinking, writing, writing, and writing,See the true feelings in details. I believe that if you master these methods, the small animals in your pen will become vivid and interesting. Come and try!

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