Composition on the hall ｜ Real thinking about the "town as a questioner": Every effort should be appreciated with fairness

(Co -sponsored by this column and Guangzhou Middle School Chinese Language Teaching Research Association)

【Composition Questions】

"Town as a questioner" is the self -deprecation of some netizens. They are born in rural or small cities and realize their life advanced through the college entrance examination. However, after entering the society, they lack a certain vision and resources.

Now it is mostly used to describe those cold doors from their backgrounds, because they are good at doing questions and are admitted to prestigious schools.

Zhang Guimei, the principal of Lijiang Huaping Women's Senior High School, said in an interview: "People say that it is not good for children to do questions, we can't help, we only have this way!"

What kind of thinking does the above materials bring you? Please write an article in conjunction with the material to reflect your feelings and thinking.

Requirements: Select the point of view, determine the idea, clarify the style, and draw the title; do not set it, not plagiarism; do not leak personal information; no less than 800 words.

【Student Composition】

Can't choose from background, struggle to achieve happiness

□ Huang Mengxin Guangzhou No. 2 Middle School Class (16) Class (16)

Born in the cold gate and through the hard work to make the "town as a questioner" of a prestigious school, is it a young man who is inspirational and successfully counterattacked, or will he only do the rustic villagers who only do questions, narrow horizons, and not good at communication?

In my opinion, no matter what the starting point and the results are good or bad, this spirit of struggle with its own efforts and pursuing a better life is always worthy of affirmation and encouragement.

"Hanmen Guizi" is a kind of praise group in ancient times or the present. They were born in rural or small towns, refused to yield to destiny, paid more effort than others, overcome the lack of innate family conditions, and opened the door of the new world for themselves. This effort and struggle itself deserve great praise.

As for the vision and resources that they lack in the city's peers after they entered the society, they are caused by their growth environment and the incomplete objective factors of the current social development. Reasons for being ridiculed and laughing.

With their continued efforts, more excellent people have been exposed to the broader stage of life, and with a more fulfilling life experience, their vision will inevitably expand, and resources will become increasingly accumulated.

What's more, is the "Town as a questioner" a certain communication ability and lack of vision? This kind of random labeling behavior undoubtedly exposes the prejudice and narrowness of some people.

The same is the "town as a questioner". If JD founder Liu Qiangdong does not have a unique accurate vision and outstanding collaborative ability, how can you firmly grasp the trend of the times and create a well -known large -scale comprehensive e -commerce company in China? "Time model" Huang Wenxiu without the great family feelings and excellent communication skills, how can he achieve poverty alleviation and improve the lives of villagers?

I believe that there are no shortage of industries in all walks of life as "town as a town" as well as their. How can people who know how to fight for happiness and work hard with their struggles are the lack of vision and abilities?

In the face of President Zhang Guimei's "we can't help, we only have this method", instead of mocking this part of the young people who came out of Dashan and the countryside lacks their horizons and resources, people should reflect on the distribution of educational resources behind this group. The current situation.

It is undeniable that accepting education and learning knowledge and entering the university with the help of college entrance examinations are one of the few opportunities for countless cold door students to change their destiny and achieve advanced life.

However, the current status of uneven distribution of educational resources in my country and inadequate development of regional education has made the educational resources that children and rural children can obtain relatively scarce, which has largely hindered their life development.

As the owner of rich and high -quality educational resources, we must recognize our luck, we must also shoulder the corresponding responsibilities, contribute to society and the country with our own efforts, and achieve common prosperity and social fairness and fairness at an early date.

You can't choose from the background. Struggle and achieve happiness. Let us applaud for every ordinary person who struggle.

【Student Composition】

"Town to do questions" breaks the wall, chasing the wind and ca n’t stop

□ Wang Sisi Guangzhou No. 2 Middle School Class (17) Class (17)

President Zhang Guimei believes that students can only have the method of "doing questions". In fact, they should be a helplessness, and it is also the sadness of uneven distribution of educational resources.

In my opinion, there may be insufficient "town to be a questioner", but it is also the best path for breaking the wall. Is this spiritual inconsistent reflecting the attitude towards the children's pursuit of the moon and the moon?

In the past, the "town is a questioner" as a self -deprecating language of netizens, which is a vivid interpretation of breaking the fate and achieving class jump.

They did not abandon themselves and settled on the status quo, but chose a "way to do the question" as a "way to the dark flowers" that seemed to be very beneficial. They deeply know that becoming the "town as a questioner" is actually the only opportunity for their rebirth.

Although this model is not perfect, it is currently the most fair competition. It allows them to stand on the same running line with those who have backgrounds and resources. Even after passing the test "going global", it is not necessarily famous, but it is far stronger than in the town in a lifetime.

But now the "town is a questioner" seems to be a weapon that hurts others in contempt, which is really the product of "lying flat culture".

In the hustle and bustle of society, some people have been devoured by desire and lost their own heart. They pursue the "philosophy of life" that have timely enjoyment, and believe that life should pursue "lying flat". Live "inaction", they will feel exclusive about the "inner volume counterattack group" who suddenly appear in the sight, so as to make stress reactions, trying to use public opinion to assimilate more people and even the "town as a questioner" group. But this kind of public opinion atmosphere is unyielding. Efforts should never be laughed at, and their origin should not be the reason for being attacked. When hard work has become the habit of "town as a questioner", who says they can't work hard to make a better future in the future?

What we should do at the moment is to do our best to break the dilemma of the "town as a questioner".

President Zhang Guimei said: "People say that it is not good to do the problem, we only have this method." This undoubtedly said that the fundamental is the fundamental -the unevenness of educational resources, and the gap between the rich and the poor cannot be ignored.

Since there is a gap, it will naturally bring a gap in communication ability and vision. Compared with cities with good environment, rural education has difficulty in running and schooling, weak teachers, and insufficient education investment -these are the current situation that needs to be changed urgently.

In the future, the state should make up for the shortcomings of educational resources through a series of measures such as policy optimization, actively allocate outstanding teachers to rural areas, broaden the channels of "town as a questioner", and vigorously promote the fairness of education; as an individual, we should also give these to these Young people's more respect and support allows them to have greater motivation to fight forward.

"Town as a questioner" should not be ridiculed, and every effort should be appreciated with fairness.

【Teacher Comments】

Both articles reflect the requirements of the composition of the test room closely.

Huang Mengxin's composition starts with the material as the starting point. Through the two contrasting properties, what attitude should be put forward to the "town as a questioner". Ask himself to answer your own opinions and opinions, and his position is clear.

The text does not leave the materials in the same paragraph, first combined with the characteristics of the "town as a questioner" to affirm their spirit of struggle, and then dialectically analyzes the shortcomings of the so -called "communication ability and lack of vision" on them.

It not only points out the objective reasons for these shortcomings, but also point out that they may be improved in the future. At the same time, it is not necessarily unique to these people. The author's point of view.

The writing layer deepen reflects the rigorousness of the author's thinking. At the end of the article, President Zhang Guimei's words in the materials led to thinking about the status quo of education, expressing their sense of mission as a city child, which accurately reflects the awareness of the candidate, but also enables the article to be sublimated.

Wang Sisi's article revolves around the term "Templar" in the material using the changes in objects and emotional colors to analyze the different mentality of self -laugher and taunt, expressing a distinctive attitude towards the two groups. It is very realistic. Target.

Then the article focuses on the present, and the essence of the problem from the words of President Zhang Guimei in the materials, and propose a measure of solving the feasibility of the uneven distribution of educational resources. Essence

The article expresses the beautiful expectations and wishes for the future with a poetic ending, and the emotions are sincere and natural.

(Guangzhou No. 2 Middle School Teacher Zeng Guang)

【Non -Teacher Comments】

From the perspective of the middle school students, the two texts are already excellent.

"Town as a questioner" reflects the current social problems and involves the youth of the vast number of townships.

The theme of this article involves a major problem of class flow in Chinese history. How to give people from all walks of life a more fair survival and development opportunity today is worth exploring.

It should be said that the articles between classmates Huang and Wang can start a multi -level discussion in the 800 -word series and have their own views -I think it is worthy of appreciation. They not only show good quality in all aspects such as levels, language, expression, and discussion, but also have the courage to appeal their own opinions.

From their age group and social perspective evaluation, two excellent compositions have been dedicated.

(Jiang Bing, President of Guangzhou Lingnan Cultural Research Association and professor of Guangdong University of Finance and Economics)

Source | Yangcheng Evening News · Yangcheng School

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School pair | Peng Jiye

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