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2022 Wuhan High School Entrance Examination Title (according to candidates' feedback integration)

Give a piece of material, there is a fast food restaurant, there are different types of packages. If you order the A package, you think you are someone you need to help. The restaurant will provide you with a free catering for free. Dignity.

Candidates are requested to write their own title based on the overall semantics of the material.

Traditional material composition questions have "heart" meaning: write others, write society, and write yourself

Analyst/Liu Hong, a senior teacher in the middle school, the leader of the Chinese language teaching and research group of Guangya Middle School in Wuhan No. 2 Middle School, the leader of Jiang'an District Language Discipline

This year, the composition of the middle school entrance examination in Wuhan still retains the traditional form of material composition examination, which is to give candidates a paragraph, asking candidates to write in the central perspective of the materials. Candidates can talk about their health in combination with their life experience, and they can also focus on the significance and value of views in life phenomena.

When candidates see the center of the composition, when they see the dignity of others and can light up the light of others' lives, they will definitely feel that the title of the composition is familiar and friendly. Because in real life, we often talk about topics related to dignity. For example, people must have dignity, people are equal, respect for others, and respect themselves. These words have annotated "dignity". It is not difficult for students to think of these, and successfully break through the trial.

Let's look at the help of people in the materials, fast food restaurants, they help the disadvantaged groups who need help are actually doing charity, but they are not high -profile publicity, and they have advertised how they have the ability to have virtue to obtain fame and fortune, but consider considering How to protect the self -esteem of the assisted and eliminate their psychological burden, so that they can enjoy it without worry. This is not only to care for their dignity, but also a kind of calm warmth and kindness. Essence

I still remember the poor people who did not eat "嗟 还" in ancient China. The poor were hungry and walked. He said that he was hungry without accepting the alms of others. It can be seen that the respect of the assistant to the recipient is how important it is. From the perspective of the poor, the dignity is higher than that of life, and the dignity of a person is the completeness and respect for life.

A person who knows how to take care of others must be a noble soul, a society that focuses on protecting everyone's dignity, and must be a civilized society. Students can cause a lot of thinking from the perspective of the caregiver and the perspective of the caregiver. In writing, their cognition, aesthetics, and spiritual levels are growing.

Writing is writing others, writing society, and ultimately writing candidates themselves.

Follow the hotspots of the times and guide young people to think about the essence of life through social phenomena

Analyst/Tian Yanping, Senior Teacher of the Eleven Chongren Junior Middle School in Laoukou District, the leader of the district language discipline, the district outstanding Communist Party, the district outstanding class teacher, the district teacher and the advanced individual, the district "excellent education quality preparation team" team leader

The composition of this middle school entrance examination follows the hotspots in the life of the times, guides students to observe and perceive life, thinks about the nature of life through hot phenomena, and express their true feelings smoothly and freely. It not only focuses on examining the core ability of students' Chinese writing, but also educate and guide the healthy growth of young students.

The selection of composition is clear and clear. The meaning of this composition is very clear. The material provides the "A package" story, which lists the many superior points that can be written in the composition one by one. It is straightforward and easy to understand. At the same time, together with the discussion sentences, form a point of view: "When others need help, treat them equally, care for the dignity of others, ignite the light of life, and make the society warmer." As long as the candidate grasps the core semantics of the two materials as a whole, it is not easy to follow with The meaning of the title is deviated.

During writing, first of all, the connotation of the keywords "equal treatment", "treating the dignity of others", "care for the dignity of others", "make the society warmer" accurately define, highlight the rich expression of keywords, and can fully support the connotation of each keyword. Then think about the "reason" to express the central point of view from the "light of life" is: equal treatment, care for the dignity of the helper, is respect for personality. Hope, people are full of love, and society is warmer. Then fully demonstrate in the text. Students can write this composition correctly in these aspects of thinking and expression while writing.

The composition materials are inspiring. The case "A package" case of composition materials first occurred in the caring package of a barbecue restaurant in Xi'an in 2019. During the epidemic, more "A package" love story appeared in the country. Be embarrassed. Such warm stories frequently reported in magazines, news, and short videos, which are easily moved and spread widely. Therefore, it is close to life, which is very inspiring, and the selected materials are very rich. As long as students usually have a certain material reading accumulation and life perception, they can find the appropriate writing material.

The composition vision is open and the angle is high. This composition is easy to guide students with the growth of current affairs, life, and individual growth. The composition hopes that the candidates can understand the value of respecting the person's personality from the "A package". As a result, divergent extension to the national level, the strong country helps the weak country, treats equally, respects the sovereignty and dignity of other countries, and can develop harmoniously. For example, the Winter Olympics and international foreign policies; you can also pay attention to your own level of life. When you help those who need help, treat them equally and respect others, so that you can truly help others and make the environment around you more warm and caring. In this way, the idea of ​​writing suddenly became cheerful. At this point, the candidates have given full play to the personality characteristics of their writing, freely created, and speak freely. A good article is born! (Changjiang Daily reporter Xiang Jie intern Hu Mingzi)

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