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Mr. Shen Congwen's "Laba Porridge" shows the content of the simple life of life, which is satisfied and cherished by ordinary life, and moved me. The more you read the more like the text, "I think about me, I can understand me; I can know people according to me." Shen Congwen really loves this life. Only on the real ordinary life can it be possible to give birth to the real courage of the ideal and beauty.

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Mr. Shen Congwen's "Laba Porridge", read it once, lost it once, put down the scroll in his hand, and sighed deeply, that was a satisfying sigh!

Porridge

When I first glanced at the subject of Lesson 2 was Laba porridge, I didn't look forward to it. I am used to writing the articles, and prepared the text early in my heart: it is nothing more than writing the ingredients of Laba porridge, how to make it, how to smell, and how to taste it. Finally Nostalgia and so on, the most words are more mellow than others.

I did not expect to be such a way from writing.

Did you write porridge? Of course, it is not a gorgeous word inherent in the lyrical object in the impression. What is the Laba porridge from the writing?

——In the Xiaomi, rice beans, dates, chestnuts, sugar, peanut kernels, and cooking into a pot, let it boil it in the pot ...

——The chestnuts are so scarce that I can't recognize it. I will be swollen all over. Jujube must be three or four times larger ...

——The rice beans are swollen ... Peanut Ren took off its infrared jacket ... The pot, it was surrounded by the pot to make a circle ...

—— but he did not expect that the color of the porridge today is dark brown ... Eightr remembered the dirty water in the dyeing tank at the same time.

When I first read the word "paste", I was a little strange. Few people wrote the process of cooking porridge in this way. Is this like this? Porridge will not be like a lower rice and beans like a list. How much ingredients are under each ingredient, it is also randomly estimated. This does not affect people's love for Laba porridge. It is a bit more, but everyone admits that it tastes more delicious than ordinary porridge. "

"Publishes", there is indeed a cuteness and playfulness that describes life; With the expansion of the language, you can feel the fragrance, sweetness, glutinous, and beauty of Laba porridge.

But in the eyes of Ba'er, the color of this porridge is dark brown, such as "dirty water in the tank", how can I understand?

Lilac is for Zongyu, the poplar trees are in Mao Dun, and the lotus pond under the moon is to Zhu Ziqing. Which lyrical object is not shining? Even Mr. Lao She, who is low -key and implicit, and Mr. Lao She, who respects the dull language as white water, writes Laba porridge and Laba garlic, and still can't help but love ripples in his heart: Laba garlic, color like emerald; Laba porridge, like a small agricultural product, like a small agricultural product, like a small agricultural product exhibition. That pride is confident and bright.

Why can't such a bright praise of porridge be found in Shen Wenzhong?

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Later, I checked the information and found that this text was a part of the novel "Laba Porridge" in the early years of Mr. Shen Congwen. Then he contacted Wang Zengqi to recall Shen Cong Cong Cong Cong Congcai's Novels.

Wang Zengqi recalled Shen Congwen's "teaching creation" and emphasized the most: "To write to the characters to write." According to Wang Zengqi, at the time, "Many students did not understand what this sentence meant to mean by him. "". Mr. Wang Zengqi has the following explanation--

I think this is the essence of novels. According to my understanding, Mr. Shen's extremely simple words include such a few layers of meaning: in the novel, the characters are the main and leading; the rest are derived and secondary. Environmental descriptions, author's subjective lyrics, and discussions can only be attached to the characters and cannot be separated from the characters. The author should breathe with the characters and sorrow together. The author's heart should be close to the characters at any time. When the author's heart "sticks" the characters, the pen will float, pan, float, slippery, and the flowers will whisty, so they will be virtuous and lose their sincerity. Moreover, the author's narrative language should be coordinated with the characters. Writing farmers, narrative language should be close to farmers; write citizens, narrative language should be similar to citizens. ("Mr. Shen Congwen at the Southwest Union")

In another article "Shen Congwen and his border town", Wang Zengqi recalled again: When Mr. Shen wrote a class, he often said: "Write on the characters", he also said, " Write inside. "

"If you want to write it to the characters", you may wish to think of this sentence as a key to open this text.

For example, Eight Er. How does a child sound like a puppy's name? Thinking twice and again, this name is not beautiful! Looking back at the "only" climbing on the floor of the house, thinking about his soft and glutinous dumplings stuck to the human arms, drilling into the arms of people, how many times watching his bone climbing climbing group. A sound "puppy" hasn't shouted in my heart for thousands of times! Eight children, a group of children, with the fluffy of porridge, a little cunning in innocence, which is more appropriate.

Similarly, the description of the Laba porridge in the article is also completely from the perspective of Eight Er. For a child who is not qualified to see sheep, and children who are not as high as the stove, in his eyes, in his limited vocabulary, seeing dark brown Laba porridge, he can only surprise Asked: "How, black!" At the same time, I thought of the dirty water in the dyeing tank. In line with the thinking of children's jumping. It is written on the character! Shen Congwen's child -like naughty humor was also hidden in the language of the novel. "Beginning to call Dad's child, he will go out to call the big boy who has been a car, and there are many old white beards on his mouth." The porridge of "sighing in the pot" porridge is innocent and appropriate. Even more wonderful, the second half of the novel, there is really a puppy, named "Ha Tao", which is very accustomed to being used by Eight Er's father and baby.

On the day of Laba, a family is ordinary and simple and happy, which is the life itself!

romantic

The most delicious is the last paragraph:

"At the dinner table, with the eight -legged eight stood by his mother, his stomach has become a small drum. The two chopsticks on the table beside him are romanticly placed into a cross. The big blue and white bowl on the table Chen bacon, Eight Er's father and mother, but it won't come. "

After waiting for so long, the porridge finally got better, but did not write the scene where the eight children had to drink porridge, and wrote the satisfaction of the family to drink the porridge like a stick. A "diagonal", let us see that the child is lazy to lean on his mother, and there is no satisfaction and comfort.

And those "romantic" chopsticks, who can think of "romantic" to describe a pair of ordinary chopsticks?

Laba porridge from the writing is like a woman with a well -skirt. Ordinary, simple, and even a little dusty fireworks. The word "romance" is the gem that the author can't help but after all. The full text of "Laba Porridge" does not have such a wild and dazzling word, "romantic" -the woman with Shen Congwen as a cloth dress, a flashing and dazzling diamond inserted on the clouds.

Shen Congwen really loves this life.

Some love is dazzling. It is like the stars in the sky. People support those sparkling words; some love, but sink into the deep water, stay in people's warm footprints, in one vegetable and one, one vegetable and one In the life of meals, the fascination of the fireworks world is precipitated.

For example, "sighing like boiling." Shen Congwen obviously likes this image, and it appears 6 times in the text. No one described a pot of porridge like this, with a satisfying sigh, still likes in the foundation, still obsessed, or cherished.

"Star fights his text, the red is his person", the words are shallow and affectionate.

Can we still have such a treasure in the heart?

Author: Song Yimeng

[This article is selected from "Chinese News · Teaching and Research Edition"]

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