[High -end dialogue] Lang Xiaomei interviewed Sanqu everyone Nan Guangxun

Lang Xiaomei

Interviewee: Nan Guangxun

Question: Mr. Zhao Yishan said in "Vulgar and Interesting, and the Vulgar -" Nan Guangxun Sanqu Collection> Preface "said:" So widely focused on all beings and well -being of the city, except for the late. Mr. Xiao Zixi, the famous San Qu, is still active in the altar of the Quantong. Does your Sanqu creation start with the writing of the market?

Answer: First of all, I would like to thank Professor Zhao Yishan for their love and praise. However, I know that I couldn't talk to the well -known Sanqu family, Mr. Xiao Zixi, who could not change to the heavenly nature. It is true that I say that I "focus on all sentient beings and the market". Because I was originally a grassone, a grassroots, and a person living in the market. I know the joy and sorrow of the people, and how the people use the humorous attitude and ridiculous language to express their love and hate. These are the "song materials" created by Sanqu, which is the material of grounding. I don't understand the details of the high -level life, so writing things can only start from the market.

Question: You have a lot of works of family members, such as writing a wife and a father. They also write themselves and their families as the lives of the people of the city. For example, "[Zheng Palace · Drunk Taiping] Ninety -year -old dad dumplings": "'Last and Last", holding the sleeve to help the kitchen, who wants to show the old kung fu today, see who is not convinced? Chinese things. Tell him to wash your hands tightly: "Anyway, boil the pan. '" The action words of the old man were in front of you, and he was very cute. I was almost stupid at the time. This work pays attention to the capture of the details, and there is no discussion. Does this work reach your creative ideals? What was the idea of ​​this song at the time?

Answer: Yes, there are a lot of family works in my song. This is because I am familiar with them and love them. They are all good people, and there are many interesting things worthwhile.

The song you give as an example is basically realistic. My old father likes to make dumplings to his family and is addictive. After more than ninety, I still did not change my heart. When I saw the dumplings, I had to get started to help. As for "Anyway, cooking in the pan" may not be said by the elderly. I remember the old man said that he wanted to wash his hands, and everyone joked, let's make up, anyway, you have to cook anyway. When I wrote the song, I added this sentence to the old father's head. In order to highlight the character to increase the "fun". As for the "focusing on the details of details" is my creative pursuit. I advocate the content I want to write with action and dialogue, so that there will be a sense of picture. And "discussion" often mixed the author's subjective judgment, and cannot give readers an "real" view effect. Of course, movement and dialogue can be tailored without having to be too close.

Question: I did n’t think of it when I moved to my old father ’s words, but this is a typical formation method that conforms to the true life of life. New literature novel creation is commonly used, and the author of contemporary poetry songs usually do not know this. I think you said that there should be a lot of authors Mao Seton. Among the contemporary songs, I do n’t know who the works can be more than Mr. Zhou Deqing's "Central Plains Yin" so -called "text and unknown, vulgar and not vulgar". Mr. Mr. once had a song "[Zhonglu · Mountain Slope Sheep] Danggawa Girl": "The figure, fashionable dress, from head to toe south Bowan. Xiaoman, Yuhuan, Wenjun incense? At a time, white, my god! Fat, my god! "I was stuck after reading, amazing. I heard that this work caused a sensation. It wasn't until some time ago that people mentioned that the filming was called. Can Mr. about the creative background and creative process of this song?

Answer: Haha! This song is purely a game and is not about it. In Chengdu that year, Teng Weiming called me for dinner, and invited Zhou Xiaotian and Zhao Yishan. Eat hot pot. There is a joke in Chengdu, saying that Zhuo Wenjun's saliva is still remained in the hot pot. The service lady that day was white and fat, which was the image of a typical Sichuan girl. Everyone is full of wine. In the hotel, I wrote this tune while the wine was intended and posted on the Internet. Unexpectedly, Ran Changchun's safe Dong Li Rongcong, such as Dazhou, spread it after seeing it. It is just a friend who is in love, and the song may not be written well.

Question: The work says "white" and a little surprised, but when it comes to "fat", it is almost shocked. The reading experience brought by this gap is really wonderful, and it is the origin of interest. The writing here is the same as the rotation of poetry. Writers must have some ways to turn back. The gentleman must realize this aspect in the process of Sanqu.

Answer: You say, "The writer must have some ways to turn back into a sharp turn." It really talks about the idea. Writing poetry composition pays attention to "inheritance and transition", and is especially like this. "Turn" is the most important. The so -called "fun" and "leopard tail" often come from this "turning". This "turning" can be abrupt, but it must be reasonable; it can be fun, but not poverty; can be sublimated, but should not be pulled up deliberately; it can be progressive or jump, but there should be traces to follow. The best result of "turning" is not only the meaning of the previous article, but also unexpectedly amazing. We often say that the rotation of Sanqu has to be "out of color", which means that.

Question: You talk about several issues that you should pay attention to when you talk about it. In fact, it is a problem that the authors (including poets) in realistic creation are prone to occur when "turning". You are particularly good. The language of this work also shows your characteristics. For example, the borrowing of foreign words such as "South Bowan" has been used many times in your works, giving people a sense of grounding, and playful, this is a major feature of your work language. How do you refine your language in Sanqu creation? Or what is the main method of your song language? Answer: In fact, "the borrowing of foreign words" is not new. As a result of people's ridicule, people often use harmonious or foreign languages ​​as daily language. Like you in the northeast, the bread is called "Great Lieba", the small bucket is called "Hey Dalon", and it is the homophonic of Russian. The English "white" that we often call it almost agreed to replace the Chinese expression of "goodbye". Sometimes joking also calls meals as "Mi", which is quite mocking in Japan's invasion. This may be the result of the integration of cultural exchanges. When we write a scattered song, we can accidentally follow this to add a sense of freshness. But cutting this is not possible, just pursuing this effect one -sided pursuit. In this way, it is like the meat residue that shows people in the teeth after meals, giving people a uncomfortable feeling.

Q: Yes. The vulgar must be appropriate, otherwise it will be poor. What year is Mr.? What is the opportunity?

Answer: For the first time, I knew that Sanqu was in 1965, when I was in high school. Our Chinese teacher, Mr. Ding Chuan Tao, gave a lecture to explain the scattered song "Some Gong Three Cry" published by Zhao Puchu. Teacher Ding's lecture made me understand the charm of Sanqu. Later, in the "Selection of the Chinese Living Page", I read the scattered "Gao Zu Return to Hometown" of the Yuan Dynasty Jingchen, which made me fascinated with Sanqu. At that time, the political environment was not suitable for scattered creation, and some occasional writing was just a joke among friends. I remember that I wrote a "Fang Shuai Sighs" in the 1970s, joking with a colleague. The surname of colleagues, I mean, I can't be the Marshal as a "Fang Shuai". At that time, there was no formal score at hand, and most of them were described according to the predecessor's examples. It was not until later that I read Professor Zhao Yishan's "Yuan Sanqu Tong Theory" that he was seriously converted to Sanqu, and gradually went to the right way.

Question: Some people attribute Sanqu to satirical poems. What do you think? What kind of themes do you think is the most suitable for Sanqu?

Answer: Some people classify Sanqu to sarcastic poetry clan, which is indeed a misunderstanding. In fact, for Sanqu, there is no restriction on the subject matter, and it can be included in the song whether it is Gogo or needle. The key is that the author must be familiar with the subject matter, and he must have a clever idea. I wrote a "[Zheng Palace · Saihongqiu] Old Father and His Anti -Japanese Medal", "Forgotten the guns and artillery, the dragon's crutches depend on. Do not dye the dust, causing Jin Guangyao to take quietly in the mirror. "

This itself is praising the hero, "positive energy". However, due to the proper cutting, the writing was not empty when the text was empty, but to show the elderly's cherishment of honor through the actions of the old father cherishes the medal. In particular, the conclusion "I often take a quiet shot to the mirror" to write the child's childlike heart: I want to look in the mirror and embarrassed, I am afraid that the family will say that they will "show", so they "quietly". In this way, the psychological activities of the elderly are also expressed.

As for the "needle", I wrote a "[Palace · Saihongqiu] Tenghai": the vast vine sea is vast, and the flowers are fluttering. The branches climbed the trees, and the buds fought on the group. The same roots also competed, and the neighbors were difficult to take care of each other.

This was written in Shijiazhuang's vitama. A mountain and the whole gap there are green vines, which are spectacular. The end of the song "Competition of the same roots, the neighbors are difficult to take care of each other, and they are going to find the way." It is both realistic and the meaning of words. Write the author's needle to the world to fight for me. I feel that writing is new.

Question: My feeling of "Fujin Sea" is a bit deliberate and hard. I prefer "Old Father and his Anti -Japanese Medal". This "Old Father and his Anti -Japanese Medal" was originally old -dry constitution. As a result, you wrote it. You can write it. I once wrote a comment. Have you been living in Beijing since childhood? How does your living environment affect your song creation?

Answer: I have lived in the hutong of Beijing since I was ten years old, and I lived near the oldest hutong "brick tower alley" in Beijing. Playing a shot racket, the so -called "hutong", which is influenced by the capital culture. Starting from Yuan Dadu, Beijing is hundreds of years of imperial capital, a national political and cultural center. These superior conditions make Beijing culture have royal style. However, the "Beijing Culture" is subdivided into "Jingshi Culture" and "Jingwei Culture". Jingshi culture is mostly official and aristocratic culture; Jingwei culture is Beijing well culture and the culture of citizens. The citizen culture in Beijing has created a "situation" and "Li'er" and high -eyed Beijingers. The situation is also the instrumental device. It is a Beijing dialect. It is described as a righteousness. As for the low eyes, the Beijingers often see anything in their eyes because of their knowledge. It is enough to do things high, but often disdain about low. For eyesight, it should be divided into two. Eye height is not wrong. Hands can be improved after exercise. What you are afraid of is low, and your eyes are low. In such a social environment, it is suitable for "tunes" to survive. The history, humanities, diets, changes, etc. of Beijing have "song materials" suitable for scattered creation everywhere. What's more, Guan Hanqing Ma Zhiyuan Wang Shifu and other Beijing -based San songs are still there. Therefore, Beijing should naturally have a place where the song writer should be scattered. Later, after graduating from high school, I went to Qinghai to support the "three -line" construction. Qinghai is a place where "people live together" like dreams. There is the ocean of folk songs, and the famous "Qinghai Flower" can almost sing. The factories I worked were all around the countryside. We ran to the ground and listened to the "尕 尕 娘" to sing flowers. Flowers have words, such as "red flowers", "尕 尕 子 back", "Brother's white peony", etc., all have a certain rhythm, which has the legacy of lyrics. If you can understand the singing, you will be moved by his bold confession of the beautiful metaphor and the enthusiastic praise. In this sense, Qinghai should also be a place for "songs".

The place where I live, Beijing and Qinghai, have influence on me to study.

Question: Your work has a strong Beijing flavor. Are you recording Beijing's story with Sanqu? Do you have a subjective purpose in this aspect? What is the purpose of your song creation?

Answer: Yes, I advocated that Beijing's song friends wrote "Jingwei Sanqu". On the one hand, it is to return the literary pattern of Sanqu to the capital, and more importantly, let the brand -new Beijing sentiment fun and the new connotation of the new connotation and new connotation. In fact, it is not just a capital, but also the characteristics of various places in various places, and scattered songs in various places should have regional pursuit and appearance. The great man once said: The nation is the world. This offseason is also applicable to literary works and scattered.

Q: What you said. Most of the literary creation starts with "I", and from "I". This is a process of growing and mature, or a general direction in a direction. "I" contains the big context and micro -language context of "I", and also contains foreign language context and internal language context. Local is a foreign language context and a micro -language context, which affects the creative internal language context that exists as the spirit of the soul. The reason why local writing is admired may be that the local author is most familiar with the author, that is, you still have to write what you are most familiar with. Beginners often lose themselves after departure from "I", so the east rakes west of the brooms and various tossing. After exploring a circle around, they come back and then find "I". Of course, this kind of tossing and exploration are also beneficial, and they are also creative accumulation. It is the sand of the sand to become a tower. The "I" that recovered again is indeed different from the "I" who started. It should be said that all your life accumulation is preparing for your scattered creation. The preparation of life is available, and the preparation of knowledge is also available. Which of the ancient song writers you appreciate the most?

Answer: In addition to Guan, Bai, Zheng, and Ma in the Yuan Dynasty, I appreciated Zhong Yicheng most. Zhong Yicheng (about 1279 — about 1360), the Yuan Dynasty writer, Sanqu family, the word Ji Xian, No. ugly Zhai, Daliang (now Kaifeng, Henan), lived in Hangzhou. Trial not to win. One of the contributions of Zhong Yicheng was writing the book "Recording Ghost Book". The book records 152 people in Jinyuan Song, and the two generations of well -known operators have been exhausted. The name of the miscellaneous drama reaches 452 types, accounting for more than 80 % of the goals of the five hundred cannons. Become the most important information for later generations to study Yuanqu. In addition, Zhong Yicheng is also a very successful Sanqu family. His "[Zheng Palace · Drunk Taiping] down" is very authentic. The song is a cynical attitude, and Huazhuang is harmonious to become elegant, shaping the image of a romantic beggar. There are three sets of songs, recording one: "Around the front street back street, enter the deep house of the courtyard. I'm afraid there will be a kind of compassion and good skirt. In the newly -replaced deputy new shop, he put the beggar on the balcony to save the poverty of our grandma! "The image he described, instead of being" begging ", rather, it is a desperate literati, the" nine Confucian and ten beggars "of the Yuan Dynasty. The strange fetus generated by the unreasonable society makes people laugh and smiles after reading. The calm attitude of the once -long vertical waves in his writing can be inspired by the scattered writers of later generations.

Question: Which of the works of modern and contemporary songwriters are you most appreciated?

Answer: Sanqu's rejuvenation and being recognized by people are nearly 20 years. With the rise of the wave of old body poems, Sanqu was remembered. In particular, the establishment of the Sanqu Work Committee of the Chinese Poetry Society has led to the rise of the wave of Sanqu. There are about 20,000 people who write scattered songs across the country. Although Sanqu is still "niche" compared with the two million people who wrote poems, it has made great progress. Because Sanqu is much higher than poetry, the entry threshold is much higher. Some people think that the songs and words are both words, and they can be used in the spectrum. This is a misunderstanding. The difference between the song and the words lies in the taste of Qu Youqu. To grasp, appreciate and write this taste, need to practice carefully. Therefore, although there are currently more than 10,000 scattered writers, I am so blunt that there are not many authors who truly form their own style. Because it is too difficult to write Sanqu. Among the scattered writers, I admire Xu Genghua in Shaanxi most.

Brother Geng Hua is a history of education at the university. After graduation, he was assigned to work in the provincial literature and history department. He has a good basis of poetry and is sincere and jealous of people. The scattered song he wrote understood the bright and fun. The following songs are examples:

[Double tone. Two Gui Ling] Lao Lingle (Author: Xu Genghua)

After throwing Li Suo's name, waking up, and sleeping. Xinghui Liang Peng, talked about Fengyue, gossip. There is leisurely on the Internet every day, and it is unconstrained. Sleeping off, eating noodles and soup, playing mahjong, wearing pants wide crotch.

The song is written by the author's relaxed and happy life scene after retirement. In particular, the ending "Sleeping off, eating noodles and drinking soup, playing mahjong, wearing pants wide crotch", lively and painted a carefree Shaanxi old man image, which is classic.

Question: Well, Mr. Geng Hua wrote a temperament -style wave, which is a more contemporary work. However, I feel that the "dignified" and "in the meeting" may not be stable.

Answer: Actually, it is good to have a good conclusion that a good conclusion is impressed. It is impossible to be classic. That is, like Zhang Yanghao's "Care of the Poor", if it is not "Xing, the people's suffering; death, and the people suffer", it may not have such a great impact.

Q: That's it. I also always like flaws but flashing works better than those who have no flaws but Wuju. What is the claim of the Sanqu creation? What is the concept of music?

Answer: My basic proposition to Sanqu is to be "trendy". Is the so -called trend the more vulgar, the better? of course not. Zhou De in the Yuan Dynasty was summarized with "text but not vulgar but not vulgar" early in the morning. It's too late to do anything. The style of "Sanqu" should be a lively and smart style, and the excessive literary qi should be restrained; and the less literary talent looks brutal and scattered, and it is naturalism. Therefore, this "vulgarity" is completely weighing between grasping, and it will lose the purpose of the scattered song, and the vulgarity will make the songs vulgar. Therefore, when writing scattered songs, the language should be "trend" without kitsch. The so -called trend refers to the popularity, but the content is not. About "Shangqu". Fun is the soul of Sanqu. People appreciate Sanqu, which is for the fun of Sanqu. This "interesting" should be "elegant", the communication of "heart", a clever ridicule, and the humor of wisdom. This fun can be the taste of life, and it can be the expression of the wisdom and fun of what you see. Perhaps the same means, but it changes a statement that it will have the tremor of the soul after reading, and it can be remembered for a long time, and it should not be too straightforward and the clouds, let alone the poor mouth after the poor. However, the "fun" of Qu is not all "stabbing". The song must be written in "song". The so -called "song" is simply to "speak elegance", and at the same time, "say the saying goes", and take the wire between elegance and customs. This can reflect the characteristics of scattered ornamental. Of course, in order to make the song write interesting, the author needs the ingenuity of the song and the ability to control the language. This is where the skill is, which requires long -term training. In view of this, we put forward the saying "Qu Si". When conceiving a work, you must follow the laws of scattered songs and tailoring, instead of designing poetry. This problem needs to be discussed specifically.

Question: Poetry and songs have their own tastes. They use their own thoughts, and the conversion of genres requires thinking conversion, so the author is usually good at one type. It is not easy to be able to connect with each other. So in the category of the creation, what do you think of the literacy of the real scattered writer?

Answer: I want to borrow my friend and poet critic, Mr. Lara, to answer this question. He said: "Writing Sanqu, in my opinion, must have such three premises: the base of the solid Chinese traditional culture; the spiritual realm of the longitudinal waves after the rolling life; The activity elements and the spirit of change obtained in the door category. "It is very willing.

Question: Each of these three prerequisites takes time accumulation. It seems that it is almost impossible for young people to write well. But if you like it, you should accumulate from youth. What are the theoretical works or doctrines (including poetry and words) of the theoretical works that are benefited from? What are you most appreciated what these works or doctrines are the theoretical views? Why? Can you talk about some reference for young people.

Answer: I mentioned earlier that on the way of my Xi, Professor Zhao Yishan's "Yuan Sanqu Tong Theory" had a great impact on me. Professor Zhao's work discusses the formation of Beicu, the tone of the northern song, the characteristics of the Yuan Sanqu, the characteristics of the Yuan Sanqu, and the Yuan Sanqu and Yuan Zi drama. At that time, I was still at the ignorance of Sanqu copying. After reading this book, I felt suddenly cheerful. Since then, Sanqu Xi has gradually stepped on the right way. In addition, Shen Fu's "Floating Sixth", "Shadow Meiyu Yiyu" Chen Peizhi's "Fragrant Lou" Jiang Tan's "Autumn Lantern" Wang Zengqi's novels and Feng Zikai's comics I have also given me the creation inspiration. These works are often called "idle books" that are not used in large use. But reading has moved people's true feelings and childlikeness. This may be the so -called "useless use".

Question: In other words, in fact, all the spare reading is nourishing and fun. Once you are devoted to creation, "popularity" is "Wen Qi", "Poetry", "Qi Qi", and "Wenqu", "Poetic Fun", "Qu", "Qu" interest". On the contrary, the so -called articles see the character's character. What are the standards for measuring the advantages and disadvantages of a song?

Answer: This is a simple and complicated question. Evaluate Sanqu and evaluate poems. This is the first basic law. It is necessary to read it. However, Sanqu must have the artistic characteristics of Sanqu, that is, the work must have the fun of "trend and interest". Otherwise, there is no difference with poetry. Regarding "Trendy and Fun", I have talked about it before. Implicate here, the so -called "vulgar" question. The vulgar language of the seemingly "spoken" of Sanqu is a language that is purified and purified from the "spoken language". I remember a stage scene called "Famen Temple", and Liu Jin, who wrote the gangster eunuch Liu Jin, said to the eunuch Jia Gui privately, "Gui'er, sit down." Jia Gui said that I was "standing." The word "standing" shows a few words of a slave. This "spoken language" seems to be casual, but there is no other language to replace it. This is classic. So as to have the so -called "Jia Gui Spirit". If Jia Gui didn't say "I am used to standing", but that "the small one dare not sit", it will seem alienated between the main servants; if you say "Where can I sit", it seems that Jia Gu has a sloppy beard Suspected. Think about it, it is not as good as "I am used to it". This also highlights the so -called "vulgar fun" beauty.

Question: The cultivation of this kind of refining ability requires considerable literary skills and experiences. Nowadays, authors are usually not available. What do you think is the biggest problem of contemporary song creation? What are the common problems and difficulties of the author? Is there a solution?

Answer: As mentioned earlier, the scattered song has been restarted for a short time, and the writer does not take a long time. It is normal to encounter some problems. As long as it is reversed in time, it will not hinder the overall situation. Moreover, some problems need to be paid attention to even in the team that writes poems. The main problems are the following:

First, follow the trend and less true feelings. A big thing came out (or is about to come out), the writer heard the wind, and wrote songs to congratulate the celebration (or wishes). Sometimes, I haven't understood it. Nor does it be conceived or tailored, let alone consider the transition, for fear of falling behind. As a result, the thousands of people are the same and the same, lack of true feelings, just lively. Although there are thousands of songs, the quality is mediocre, and there are few people who can be called Taoism. What about such a work? After a gust of gusts, he was silent, leaving no trace. Didn't we say that we must fight for poetry songs? First of all, you must have good works, instead of leaving the second product to history to future generations.

Second, there are many codewords and less fun. It may also be the initial threshold. Some scattered writers are only satisfied with the coding code, and they think that only this is the inheritance and respect for Yuanqu. The coding code is good, because there must be a rule for doing anything. "Spectrum" is the rules and torque of scattered songs. There is no discussion here for "spectrum", but the soul of the scattered song lies in the fun rather than the "outrageous" of the individual words. There is a saying that "there is no score", because the scattered song is a singing, which is accompanied by music, and the song music is one. Later, due to the loss of music scores, only the text was left. Later generations were reluctant to identify it with Pingzhang to calibrate the word position. This is the so -called "score" we see now. Due to the difference in cognition of the positive and singing cavity, there are differences in labeling. It can only be converged. This is the reason why the scores are different. Therefore, our inheritance of Sanqu is to inherit the soul of Sanqu on the basis of basic respect for the existing "music scores", that is, the nature of the scattered song "trend interesting". In addition to the contest for the convenience of the contest, it is convenient to submit a submission, and the usual work should work more on the fun. Of course, the flatness of the keyword position is unshakable. If it is not the word position of the key point (non -working place), it is not necessary to use the rhythm of the word that does not harm the word, and you don't have to be regarded as a big reverse. Still the words: "The shortcomings of the shortcomings are soldiers, and the perfect flies are just flies." Therefore, we are right, but we must not ask the fun just to take the code word, otherwise it will be abandoned.

Third, there are many discussions and less image. How does poetry impress people? Mainly the description of the image, the appropriate metaphor, and a wonderful conversation. Write the landscape in the south, don't talk about beauty! Instead, "the water is horizontal, and the mountain is the peak of the eyebrows." So people remember it. Saying the lonely loneliness of the beautiful woman, not worrying about it, but saying, "The curtain rolls the west wind, people are thinner than yellow flowers." So people admired it. In addition, the hostess and the "roller curtain" dialogue, "Do you know, know if it is green fat, red and thin", it is surrounded by eight or nine hundred years in our ears. These should be inspired by the people who Xi. Due to the special requirements of the small volume and the interesting interest, the writer needs to worry about the words, and it should not waste the length of the empty space. Instead, there should be a few words to show the distinctive image to the reader. Just like sculptors and cartoonists, speaking with works without a redundant explanation. Fourth, especially to point out the problem of song style word. The rhyme style of Sanqu is the product of continuous innovation and breakthrough in poetry. It is a new lyrics made of the customs of the Southern Song Dynasty plus the folk singing and minority songs. So that it has become one of the three rhymes of rhymes tied with poetry. From the beginning, Sanqu paid attention to the folk fireworks, that is, the "voice of the times". Sanqu is the most easily combined with the times. Because it is so popular and ironic, it is very easy to be accepted. Even if it is a big subject, it can be written easily and humorous. However, it is worth mentioning that there is a tendency to "style word" in the creation of Sanqu. Of course, songs and words are rhymes of components, but there are essential differences in the artistic style and words of loose songs. In short, the words are elegant and vulgar; In the final analysis, writing scattered songs is the playful and interesting of the language of the times in the frame of the song score, and do not deliberately quote the scriptures. Ren Zhongmin said in the "Introduction to Sanqu • Practice" and the differences between words and scattered songs: "Words are bold by grace as the main body, and the song is based on boldness." Essence Although Sanqu, as a poetic, will inevitably develop and change. But it must not be degraded to words. If the song retreats, how can the word retreat? This is a simple truth.

Question: Yes, the image of today's poetry is also weak. In addition, my gentleman's so -called "fun", I can often read from my husband's work, there are works mentioned earlier, so I am not forgotten. So how can Sanqu creation be "interesting"? There must be any way to understand this, can you talk about the teaching of the Sandqu Xi?

Answer: If you want to answer this question, you must first explain what is "fun". What we call "fun" actually refers to "interest", and "interest" has the characteristics that make people feel happy, pleasant and delicious. The so -called "fun" bento is like this. It may not be exhausted when writing, but what is to say, it can make people feel pleasing. Song Yei said in "Poems of the Postsa Liu Kesun": "The weirdness is easy, interesting is beyond words" means this means. It is necessary to express the meaning of "weird Wei Qi Jue" in peaceful language, so that "interest" becomes "meaning outside words." But remember that you must not make people feel like guessing riddles. The fun of Sanqu should be as much as possible, just like Ma Sanli's cross talk: the ancestral secret recipe for treating all the itchy ancestors is just the word "scratching". Please watch the humble work "[Zhenggong · Saihongqiu] on the street": The aunt is giving her idle, and the pedestrian asks for a smile. After checking the status and checking the license, I didn't think of how to arrive for a long time. After leaving half a station, we called the pedestrians: "We really don't know." The story of a foreigner asked the streets on the streets of Beijing. The aunt in Beijing is serious and enthusiastic and vigilant, and of course he is curious. Asked the passers -by, asked "the bottom of the bottom". As a result, I still don't know how to go. I wrote the image of the old lady in Beijing here, and the passerby has left, and it can be ended. However, the aunt is very serious and responsible. She has to stop the pedestrians who have "left half of the station" and add a sentence "We really don't know". The diversity is more plump.

Question: Therefore, one of "fun" is a typical plump "fun". Can you say that?

Answer: I wanted to start this problem, such as the author's experience and character. But it's too long and complicated. This is a question worth discussing, and there will be a chance to talk about it later.

Question: Can you provide other experiences, lessons, and suggestions for later scattered practitioners?

Answer: Sometimes I look at my past works on the Internet and often feel blushing. Feeling naive and immature. Therefore, I suggest that after writing a work of a writer, do not rush to show the public, first put it. After a few days, take it out to modify it. This may be able to find defects and deficiencies, and it will be more satisfactory. However, this is my own opinion, for reference only.

Question: I also feel the same. Preparing what is officially issued, I will put the precipitation for a period of time, and then look back, the problem is now. I usually send a circle of friends when I write a poem. On the one hand, some friends will see the opinions. On the one hand, I will repeatedly find the problems and modify it repeatedly. This is another form of precipitation. Do you have any expectations for the next 10 years of song creation?

Answer: Can I live for ten years? Ha ha!

Question: The gentleman's creative temperament is cheerful, energetic, and wise. My feeling is not a problem at all. I did n’t know Mr. before, but from the time of the work, it was sometimes funny, natural, natural, and wayward, full of vitality, completely different from everyone. Because of the eye -catching love, I have reviewed Mr. San song, although I have never wrote a scattered work before. What are the comments and suggestions on the current scattered comments (including WeChat)? Answer: The current literary criticism is a weak item. Due to the special pattern, Sanqu criticized articles (especially criticism of the works of contemporary song authors). Therefore, I am particularly grateful and cherished your comments on clumsy work. I have collected each of your reviews. For literary criticism, I hope that relevant departments and specialists should also pay attention to divide my energy and talents on some literary criticisms that are placed in scattered songs. The progress of literature is good for the development and quality of the author's team.

Interviewee Mr. Nan Guangxun's Sanqu Works Selection

[Double Tune · Xiang Fei Resentment] Sell Lixi Shi Shi

Qiu Pear fell into a tree with a tree, and the aunt who sold Guo Village was late. Leaning the fence door twisted slightly. He is like a willow, his legs are like egrets, and Hongxiali stands a Shihi.

2013.11.23

[Zhonglu · Mountain Step Sheep] "Female Man" who sells pumpkins

The tall one, the dark color, is broken by the melon. The sleeve is high, his eyes are touched, and a group of tourists are caught: "There are many organic ingredients of green green. Gourd, get on the car first; money, let's talk about it."

2013.11.23

[Zhonglu · Mountain Step Sheep] Play of Boss Yellow Boss of Leek Sauce

Happy Maitreya, You Fang Xia Ke, born with a greedy. The sun touched, thought about it at night, and tasted all the flavors in the world. Pickled vegetables for ten years corrected fruit. Officials, recognition; people, and recognition.

2014.01.20

【Zhenggong · Drunk Taiping】 Chu Xue

The clouds are wide, snow falls into the sky, and the silver butterfly dances is imminent and comfortable. Xishan was looking at the immortal world, and Panshan passers -by. The old wife changed the embroidered shoes, and went to see Mei!

2014.02.07

[Zhenggong Saihongqiu] Look at the mountain peach

This life is mixed in the rivers and lakes, and the feet have not practiced. When I was old, I went to Taoyuan County, and I knew that the red powder was enchanting. Tosimal fragrance, seal layer by layer. We paid Peach Blossom.

2014.02.26

【Double Turned · Aqusians】 The streets of Xi'an

The young woman fat Yang Fei, Suwan wide clothes lazy, fast -moving words and crispy, hurriedly walked like flying. Who is calling on the phone? Plugs, strawberries, chase while bite.

2014.05.18

[Xianlu Half] Elderly Chorus Team

In the love song, I remembered that year, I was resistant to the double spots, and the bird flowing clouds no longer repaid. Xiang Qingtian, half of the sound and half of the crowd.

2014.10.24-25

[Double Tune · Dianqianhuan] He Zhide's new home is completed

Freshly, the bungalow buckled top. Mountain villas dress, heaven and earth. Half -acre in front of the door, the peach blossom shore behind the window, into the longevity hall. At the wall of the wall, make up the green mountains.

2015.01.07

[Zhonglu · Chao Tianzi] Classmates will meet Yiren

is her! is her! New paintings of eyebrows. Fifty -one -to -day Xia, often hanging in my heart. The years are floating, clouds and water cliffs, and a bowl of tea. "What do you think? What do you think? Haven't seen white hair?"

2015.02.02

[Zhenggong Saihongqiu] Before going out

The ringing of the mobile phone was like urging, and the old wife told: "Before the person, he did not play with a blue head, and wiped both hands before the meal. Yeah, it is simply "简".

2015.02.04

[Zhonglu · Mountain Step Sheep] The old couple watched the TV series

Swipe the pans, the doors and windows were bruised, and the cat sat in front of the dog. Meiy Gong'e, Brother Jun, a steel knife ax. See the clearance of the lamp drilling the bed. Name, I don't remember; people, don't remember.

2015.04.28

[Zhonglu · Mountain Step Sheep] Night Study in the Late Autumn Mountains

The stars are destroyed, the wind is cut, and the cold current has passed the Great Wall. The road is horizontal, the trees are diagonal, and Qinghui has a mountain moon. The sound of geese returned. Huh, higher; should, lower.

2015.10.12

[Double Tune · Two Gui Ling] Question diagram: chat

Sitting in front of the door, two pro -family, a pair of white heads, two chrysanthemums. Li Rihe Feng, Huaiyin Chancin, chicken, dogs and goose and duck. Bite your ears, blink your eyebrows; slap your palm, laugh haha. Guzi sesame, daughter -in -law doll, old news, what to talk about.

2015.11.05

[Zhonglu · Mountain Step Sheep] Hometown Wing Wuqu

Exploring the ancestors with my cousin

The clouds are dense, the wind is stunned, and the monument is buried. The grass is fascinated, the Bai Shu is alienated, and the crowye cannot wave. Brother Bai Haofang said: "I, lying here; you, lying there."

Centennial aunt

Don't be hungry or not, don't be sad, and your eyebrows close your eyes. There are many hard work, many people read, and the sunrise and sunset are passing every day. Bai Lian's body becomes positive. Wake up, sit in the Buddha; lie down, lying a Buddha.

Cousin

Seventy open, the male wind is still there, and the wide crotch cotton pants and thick belt. Short whitening white, birth eyebrows white, towel wrapped in a bao's head. Speaking of emotional snotes: "Uncle, can't you come? Nephew, can't you come?"

Auntie Hundreds of Secret Tips

Lost claims, messy people, deafness and disguise. Not greedy, not greedy, Xiaomi boiled porridge every day. The warmth of the soil calamus is warm. People, lying on half; cats, lying on the half.

Ancestral house

The sunset is disabled, the smoke is lingering, and the old trees are screaming. Old brick carvings, broken windows, faintly see the appearance of the year. Broken walls are grass. The door, dismantled; people, left.

2015.11.12 Write [Zhenggong · Sai Hongqiu] Youxian Yinyin Wuqu encounters vegetables

Qingyi shorts thick belt, mango shoes bucket bamboo cigarette bag. The stubble is like Zhoucang, and the basket is full of fresh vegetables. The ridicule is not unreasonable, I do n’t sell him, haha ​​laughed and said, “White!”

[Zhenggong · Saihongqiu] Women on the streets of Wutu, Youxian Yinyin

Orchid sleeve lotic arm, the apron's legs to protect the chest. The brush was really numb, and the words were inadvertent. After collecting the employer's money, I watched the pedestrians and won't look at it.

2016.10.19-22

[Masaki Palace · Shuangzhuang] Old Wife

Old and obedient, little obedient, the chrysanthemums were full of chrysanthemums. The return of the smell is not enough, and the earrings are about to pick it up.

2016.11.04

[Zhonglu · Mountain Step Sheep] Pickuper

Born in poor counties, taking the bridge of the nest, Chunhua Qiuyue did not look at it. Don't be idle, don't talk about it, pull the car and turn your bag every day. You always threw him to check. The bottle is also money; the box is also the money.

【Zhonglu · Mountain Step Sheep】 Potter

Behind the house, the single -string solo, asking for the phoenix music without teasing. Beautiful, Le Yoshiyou, it is also difficult to re -re -life. As long as the wooden hammer is held in hand, people, people go everywhere; money, there is everywhere.

2016.11.06-07

[Zhonglu · Mountain Step Sheep] Eat the Northeast Killing Pig

High signboards, high red lights, white -sauerkraut promotional paintings. Big window flowers, old rakes, pepper hanging under the eaves. Welcome to the girl: Mother, visit! Mother, guest!

2016.12.14

[Zhenggong Saihongqiu] She at the same table

one

Patch the cotton jacket military uniform cover, the brush braids are raised. Someone calls "to" first! Geer exported to the deserted tone. People say that the moon is closed, and I am shameless, but unfortunately he refuses to laugh lightly.

two

She whistled out of the fuck station, and she worked to work in the countryside. She could fight for the glory for collectives. When asking questions in the classroom, Li Zheng's high voice reported: "I don’t know yet!"

three

The two factions of the Cultural Revolution were blind, and women took chicken blood men. Like Zhang Shi Shin's military hat, with a band of blue muscles. In order to get capital due to his father, no one wanted the puppy from the sky.

Four

Three years of mud soup in the countryside, the gangbon brand was not clear. The mountains have a lot of sunshine, and the villages are commissioned to rely on. In the first year, he raised a gun in the next year, holding his arms in his hand.

five

My father put on a new official hat, and Wen Ji returned to Han. The road to return to the city is curved, who cares about the young girl? The mother -in -law cried, her husband clamped his chest, and said that the eggs flew off.

six

This year, she returned to school, and others were late. A white hair dropped three points, and the wrinkles were full of deep face. Quietly hid, lazily leaning on the window sill, and still refused to laugh lightly.

2017.01.12-13

【Double Tune · Aqushamous】 Early spring garden

Li Hua has vomited a little gurgling, and the new grass is like nothing. The clothing of the generals, the hook scratching the eight arms. When the countryside is flat, the cigarette fights, lean on the crane, watch the clouds and clouds.

2017.03.05

[Zhonglu · Mountain Step Sheep] Lao Lao Lun Lunch on Rainy Day

The sky is low, the flowers are thin, and the spring breeze is thin and cold. The two steamed buns, a bowl of porridge, some of the greens in the plate. Half a bowl of sour and sweet home, you, take a sip; I, ​​take a sip.

2017.03.23

【Zheng Palace · Drunk Taiping】 Encounter

The copper pot was dry and smoke, and by the path of the trail. There are pearl skewers hanging on the chest, a diamond drill on the fingers, and "Mi You Dan" on his lips. It is short than the hero.

2017.06.16

[Zhenggong · Drunk Taiping] The old man who repair the car is dead

It was said that because of the gastrointestinal and intestines, the tunnel was low, and the trees were lifted under the chest. The sunrise and sunset are common, and the three meals are still oily and salt sauce. Remember to find the "Monkey King".

2017.08.09

[Zhenggong Saihongqiu] Play Flute Player Mao Jianmin

The old mountain war returned, and the shoulder chapter added beans. Hugh said on the empty city plan, and the national banquet came and went. During the dinner, he accompanied the VIPs and used the floods to blow him.

2017.08.20

[Zhonglu · Mountain Step Sheep] Fifteen songs in the shape of the second uncle in Beijing

Early

Poop velvet hat, scarf slice, and cotton cover. The birds were carrying, the dog followed, and the car was bucted into the forest. When you meet an acquaintance, ask, "Have you eaten?" "Oh, it's over."

Buy food

Drink enough to eat enough, right to walk, and then walked in front of his wife. Don't bow your head, don't look up, pigs and sheep don't look at fat and thin. The price is not listened to. Come, copy your hands; return, copy your hands.

Say "eat"

The essence of people's livelihood can be made up, and they do not ask for the name. The ground is far away, and Lu Yiyi can find it through the city. "It is the coincidence that bean juice also has to drink: the coke ring, indispensable; hot silk, indispensable."

Stir -fry

The liver and intestine are half -ginseng, the color is red and bright, and the flour is raised to shoot garlic. The taste is thick, teasing, no spoons need to be chaotic. The bergamot supports the bowl towards the sky. Stick a little, drink a little; suck, drink a little.

Meal

The square table is not large, sweet and sour and spicy. As soon as the chopsticks are taken, the words are posted, "Eat it, eat it all." Only then can others move "claws". Male, clip the vegetables; female, steak rice.

Watch chess

The throat cough, frowning light, leisurely cotton cotton sleeves. The upper head, the bottom of the limelight, the praying mantis yellow bird fights before and after. The gentleman watched chess. Black is also a friend; Red is also a friend.

Hospitality

"The magpie*screams, the smoke pot is flowing, and it really comes today." Holding his hands, his arms next to him, and asking the warm brick road. Walk to the front curtain: tea, soak it; wine, hot. *味, Jingwei Reading qiao lightly

sleep

The vest took off, the trousers took off, and "out of the slip" drilled into the "fairy temple". Take a look at the left, look at the right, look up and call "His mother": "Mali'er puts the night pot. Hands, can be; people, don't touch it."

Ge before the temple fair

Merchant street vendors, empty bamboo Shaya, and half of the year. Look at the drilling ring, look at the Spring United, and see the hemp rope Hong Guo'er wearing a string. Tired of resting in front of the stall. Enemy, come a plate of meals; tea, a bowl.

Dream Listening

The name horn is all over, and it is difficult to find a vote. Thanks to the son's digging. I didn't look at it, the fan didn't shake, and she smiled down with her head down. Singing to the festival, it was applauded, and it was dawn. Hey, no plays.

Get ill

There was no sweat on his forehead, a cold battle, and not thinking about tobacco and alcohol. In front of the sick bed, saying to people, "Headache brain is common. Grab a fry in Tongrentang. The prescription, the table on the table; the medicine pot, the under the cabinet."

Call

With a weak body, the tea does not think about it, and it is difficult to break the heavenly door this time. For children and grandchildren, I am worried, "I am afraid that there is no one who asked the yellow bird. Ask your mother to see the tightness. Birds, don't give away;

Contented

Jiuchenger played everywhere, eats well, and see the dynasty in person. There are clothes wearing, bed sleep, and his wife does not change. The granddaughter grandson around the couch. Look, it's all pleasing to the eye; walking, closing your eyes.

Healing

Scraping moxibustion Ai, soup pills are not negative, Yangjian debt is not available in this life. The ghost did not come, the soil was not buried, and he got out of bed again. Go to the front of the door: Cloud, float over; pigeons, fly over.

Celebrate

Relatives and relatives are here, all their children and grandchildren arrive, and the lanterns are surrounded by people. Hurry red robe, holding fairy peaches, never had a banquet to take pictures first. Set the height of the long and young: east, caught cat; west, next to the bird.

2017.11.09-16

【Double Tune · Aqushamous】 Drink with my wife

Peanut edama mix cucumber, slowly grind his teeth and slowly. There are no extra words, and the tenderness is like sunset. Xiaoqiao Liushui people. Strong wine, tea, drinking people with peach blossoms.

2017.11.14

[Zhenggong · Saihongqiu] Passing through the streets to travel to Beijing Twelve Songs

Nanluoguxiang

Qianchaofang Lane is famous for its reputation. Because there was no demolition, Taohuayun was now gone. The official house changes the bar, "Jie Bianer"*bag. Mixed Chinese and Western mixed race.

*"Jie Bian'er", the meaning of "next door" in Beijing dialect.

Bell

The eaves are neutral, and the morning bell twilight becomes a memory. At that time, it was even more loud, and you need to pay attention to blowing the lights early. Now downstairs, it becomes a place of free, and the curved children eat "Yao Ji" *.

*Yao Ji fried liver shop at the corner of the Gulou.

Brick tower

Wan Songye has a sleepy land, and the dynasty has replaced several generations. Qinlou Chu Pavilion is romantic, and talented books will be sad. People came to find the old trace, and there was no trace of munition.

Kaocaikou

Outside the gate of Xuanwu City, the head beheaded. Today, the ghost debt, the long street is fast. There are many shops along the way, you buy him to sell. The name of the slaughter is no longer the street name.

Bridge

The fish dragon and snake rats lived, and the golden car jade was taken away. Both people come here to find things, and the poor are here to find food. The poor are still poor, and the rich are still rich.

Yongding Gate

Once the Ming and Qing dynasties, they were outside Tianqiao. I do n’t know who hurts, and the order is dismantled quickly. Now rebuilt again, fortunately the blueprint is there, and Ma slipping up money.

Cow street

Halal Temple is like palace. Building white and green connected to Tianyuan. Hui people are used to live here, and food has become a new business card. Sticky cakes and cakes, banquets and banquets, and blue flags are competing.

Posterior sea

In the past, the ship was like sails, and the tea houses were contended for guests. Demon Ji Xian Sakura's lips were broken, and the stars were faint. Now there are many bars, Hongying Rose. Who comes here purely?

Hufang Bridge *

Once the tiger was located, the sound of the sound of ten miles was palpitated. Since changing the new emperor calendar, the Beastmaster has no trace. The bridge was famous for borrowing tigers, and the tiger continued to borrow the bridge, and accidentally smelled the smell.

*Hufang Bridge was originally a place for royal tigers.

Baoguo Temple*

The archway is still standing in front of the door, and the name of the temple is still true. Where do monks swim? The eaves of the main hall are flying. If you do n’t report to the country, you do n’t know if you do n’t know the country.

*Baoguo Temple west of the Cai City of Guang'anmen Inner Street. Now it is the ancient coin trading market.

Baita Temple*

After many times, Tianlei Fire has disappeared, but the smoke of the Buddha's temple has disappeared, but the white tower is survived, and the plain soap hat is a sign: Asian Saisa gourd, silent time, it is difficult to say.

*Miaoying Temple is also known as Baita Temple. White Tower was created by the Nepalese master of the Shiyuan Dynasty to the 16th year of the Yuan Dynasty (1279). Later, all the temples of the temple were destroyed due to Leihu, and only Baita was spared.

De Shengmen

Heavenly soldiers still faced the road, and whipped the horse to slap the belly. The general Jie Yishan shouted, and the king entered the gram dew. Mo Dao Ruojin soup, Mo Dao Jiangshan Gu, and the king of the city also hit the gate.

2017.11.17-27

【Double Tune · Aqushamous】 Early spring garden

Li Hua has vomited a little gurgling, and the new grass is like nothing. The clothing of the generals, the hook scratching the eight arms. When the countryside is flat, the cigarette fights, lean on the crane, watch the clouds and clouds.

[Lang Xiaomei Review] The image of the language is strong. Works and classical words with words and classical words. As soon as I read "Little Guru", I couldn't help laughing. It's so cute. The lively and cheerful and happy extremes of this "spoken language" cannot be reached by classical Chinese. With the "general's belly", the character image in the work can be described as full of the text screen, and it can be seen that the author of the author outside the work is cute. In addition, common words such as "scratching, scratching, and comb" are also close to others, which is quite gratifying. Classical words used, such as "eight arms" and "crane", etc., and spoken words in a work, the overall tone can be harmonious, it is Kajia. In addition, the antonyms of "similar" are novel and reasonable for the use of grass to write grass. Compared with the distinctive grass, if there is no, there should be a updated grass. But there are two discussion: one is the contradiction between the state of "芊" and "similar", and "芊" means "lush grass and trees". Using flooding, it is very clear to read the pleasure. It seems that the predecessors who were Gao Gao Miao often did not feel that they couldn't extricate themselves. I can wait for ordinary people to talk to masturbation. [Zhenggong Saihongqiu] Old father and his Anti -Japanese Medal

Already forgot the guns and guns, the faucet cane depends on it. The medal became a child's medicine, and the chest was unhappy. In order not to dye the dust, Jin Guangyao often takes quietly in the mirror.

[Lang Xiaomei Review] 45 words, just write a detailed movement that the old man will not care about the mirror as an ordinary person. However, I first read the old man like a child, which is interesting. I can't help but be sad again. This is a hero, who is not allowed to leave traces in many things. He cares for that medal alone. Either bloody wind, or gunfire rain, or comrades who can't come back, all stories related to that war are carried in that small medal. It is like a keys. When the reader feels like, the key is opened, and people walk through the time and space promenade. So those cruel floating lights still force the face frequently. Anti -Japanese things do not use the call sign, and write the habit and illness that there is no song should be made, and can come out with a different look of reading, or in the author, "Only in interest, antelope hanging the corner, no trace of trace, no trace of trace The power of convergence and writing can be required. The cover is not a big theme, but who is written by the big subject. If it is not as light as the weight of the weightlifting, it is light, the teeth are cracked, and the rough neck battle stocks are naturally ugly.

[Double Tune · Aqushamous] Passing "Christmas"

The foreign festival was introduced in any arrangement. Seeing acquaintances lifted his hand: Okay, right, Gu Bai, congratulations to getting rich.

[Lang Xiaomei Review] I laughed and saw it. Harmony, in ancient times, it is difficult to write the unique harmony of today's people and make instant innovation. Writing the localization of the festival, the dissolution and integration of foreign culture in the fierce collision with local customs. This is the originality of Mr. Nan and has its distinctive color. Its distinctive color is reflected in the time of the phenomenon of the surface layer itself, the calm cultural tolerance and free cultural transformation of the Chinese people expressed in the bottom of the work, and the basic true cultural self -confidence it originated. In terms of writing, one of its superb is that the work of the two typical details of the Christmas Day (or what they see) is: the dinner and the goblin of the Chinese and Western hybrids are all discussing Speaking in detail has its strong objective expression. Second, the words are unexpected and appropriate, and they are very interesting. The most attractive is the transliteration of English greetings familiar to "good right" and "Gu Bai", and uses unexpected Chinese spoken words to deal with it. The voices, so life -oriented, it is abdomen; one is "OK, Gu, Gu's Bai" and "Congratulations to Fortune", the two groups of words in China and Western words are the same as opposite. In addition, the "boiled cabbage" is taken in the northern dialect, grounded, and it is very easy to read. The work, as usual, shows the openness and interest of Mr. Nan. Zhu Guangqian's "Poetry Theory" said: "People who have no harmony are probably not easy to write poetry, nor can they appreciate poetry. Harmony poetry is full of anger and richness. . "He also said," The ability of the poet can be harmonious. "It is probably good.

[Zhenggong · Saihongqiu] Inspirational Sico's Conechical Stock Stocks

I scolded the awl in my hand: I was sleepy when I turned it over! I booked a new plan yesterday. Just persist for a day, how can you say it lightly! The white wall is shining three times.

[Lang Xiaomei Review] Mr. Lang Xiaomei is fun and toxic, teach addicted. The four songs are interesting, don't have a highly unattainable vulgar elegance. Take the four sections to see: First, it is good to set up a burden and sink, and the first six sentences are arranged without leakage. Until the last sudden mutation, it suddenly opens the bag Its fun. Secondly, I ca n’t see how high it is, “胯”, and the words of the slag are used to be used; It's so powerful that it is so energetic. The work has been rarely escaped from the restraint of the language, and the internal logical thinking activities of the innocence of the whole body of the artery running through the whole body drive the language. The language is simple and smooth. However, the words are lively. The essence of qi. It is a category of so -called human songs.

[Zhonglu · Mountain Step Sheep] The old two in -laws are a pair of in -laws, which can be called a perfect match. Follow each other, stay with each other, nails without cutting back. How can the wings fly? Out, I can't find the North; I can't find the north.

[Lang Xiaomei Review] Jieyi. Analysis and learning: The beauty is one, and the inside is rigorous. "Palace" explained "Old Two". The first eight characters are centered. After that, each sentence is made from the "one pair" and "perfect match", which is a total score structure. The logic is clear and rank. Wonderful place, the text is comfortable. One said, echo the title "Two", one, one, one, one, one, one, one, and the other. Similar comparisons are interesting. One said the fun of harmonious language, hand in hand and use the life harmonious language, such as "old two" such as "can't find North". One said that the fun of refurbishment, such as one food and renovation said "you have a cooking skills," for example, not cutting nails normally, scratching the back normal, and the relationship between the two constituent Essence One said the interest of resignation. Ru Yu "Old Two" is fresh. If you use "out" and "back" to relatively stand to see the dynamic change, "can't find the North" repeated, intentionally emphasized the merit, and the rhythm of the rhythm of the loop between the rhythm is uniform.

[Double Tune · Dianqian Huan] San • Eighth Gifts

Drunk Yan Yan, I asked my wife: "What do I need to be a holiday gift? Let me talk about it." The mother -in -law put down the pot, hahale, and sat in front of me: "I just want you to snore, don't talk about it! "

[Lang Xiaomei Review] Like. Why? One said that it is true, and the work is not pretending. The work simply records a conversation of Weng Po, whitening and vernacular, and the words are comfortable. The second is cut, and the words are used in accordance with the characteristics of Weng Po's identity in words. Three said that the work is not good at the good of the two, but borrowing a dialogue romance, so it is not empty and sensible. Four vulgarity, except for the words and vulgarity, their love is also vulgar, full of ordinary people, full of flourishing and warm fireworks, I love this fireworks. Five said that the dialogue with the author has unexpected interests and is embarrassed. There are often interests of life, and interesting poets are not often available. Those who have fun must be an interesting person first. However, in the work, "Talk to me" and "Dreamless Talk" are reused, and they are unwell.

【Double Tune · Drunk Dongfeng】 In the early spring of the spring

"Welcome to the spring" to vomit gold, and the long river bank Liuzhangyun. Fog clothes, wind and stun. Seeing the shepherd who was whip and roaring, half -open chest was half -covered, and the waist of cotton pants was half loose.

[Lang Xiaomei Review] "Welcome to the Spring" plus quotation to avoid ambiguity. Like a micro -movie, the first two sentences from the spring flowers to the shaow of the long river bank, and then the characters showed the details of the shepherd's action, as well as the dress details, vivid images, and characteristic characteristics. And the language is free, and the word "half" is repeated, between changes and unchanged, to the beauty of rhythm. Mei Zhi's opinion, insufficient works or on the "bank"-"shore", "clothing"-"placket"; also, if the writer himself is not beneficial, it is abandoned if the writer himself is not beneficial, it is not beneficial to the work. Pen; if you write the shepherd, write "clothes" and "鬓" here, contact the "whip whip"-襟 怀-cotton pants waist, from the perspective of the picture far away, it seems that the lens has a sense of capture.

[Zhonglu · Mountain Step Sheep] Drink bean juice's memory

The eaves were low, the stove was hot, and the spoon slowly stirred the blue and yellow. Drink on the square table, and the hot silk enters the entrance. A rotten ring is round like bracelets. Sour, also happy;

[Lang Xiaomei Review] The environment of drinking bean juice is out, the low eaves break the door, the red furnace hot pot; the cooking state of the bean juice is out, the horse spoon slowly stirs the blue and yellow foam; Drink around the circle, add some spicy; the taste of bean juice came out, sour, crooked; people who boiled bean juice came out and stir slowly; people who drink bean juice came out and are happy. This is the fresh section of the old -fashioned life of the old people in the old lane of the old Beijing. The vivid historical memory function of Sanqu has recovered and reserved the typical old Beijing's folk life that has quietly disappeared. The difference between the history of literature and historical records is that the history of history is intentional, dead, cold, and serving the interests of some people. The history of literature is unintentional. It is full of personal tragedy Happy, always alive, hot air, opening is the original appearance of the living at that time, only serving the individual's awareness of life. That is, like this song, it does not make a masterpiece, which is more true, natural, and infectious than the works that are based on history. Of course, all this requires a premise, that is, the author must have deep language skills, certain artistic cultivation, vulgar and good temperament, and experience. The vulgar meaning is strong, Jingwei is pure, and the words are natural. There is no word to feel uncomfortable. It's just that I have only drank it once. I haven't seen production once. There is a "coke ring" in the horse spoon to understand that there is a "burnt ring" in the bowl. Then to say that it was in the horse spoon, it was already filled with the horse spoon and opened the table to drink, and suddenly returned to the horse spoon. It seemed that the order of writing space was a bit messy.

- END -