[Master's Evaluation Poetry] Song Caixia: Bai Yulu Saying Poetry · Episode 46

江 花 · Chu Xia Songhua River on the River

Shi Jianping

In the Mayday of Duanyang, the wind returned to Zimo Die together. The flat boat ripples the Songjiang River, and the coast is fresh.

Below the foothills, before the trees, I listened to a few times. When to meet the heart, you can kiss nature again.

[Song Caixia Review] This word is rushing and the layout is well -proposed. The next film "Under the foot of the mountain, before the trees, I listened to the valley a few times." Suddenly, "When will meet the heart, you can kiss nature again." The love of "kissing nature", and there are mountains and rivers in the mountains, and the dark flowers are blossoming.

Jujube

Sun Shouhua

Who opened the mine and saw the peak falling from Jiuyuan.

I planted a few jujube seeds to show this green mountain here.

[Song Caixia Review] This song with his "Selling Sky" is the work of the Youth Poetry Association. After I got it, I attributed it to "Selling the Sky": "Selling a small village official, selling land to sell land to sell The river is still selling mountains. It's not that the breeze comes tightly, and I know that I dare not sell it. " Surprise to complete the central idea to express in the calmness. The sharp pen is sharp and profound.

Mixed sense

Yang Yiming

Eighty -hundred is strange, disorderly red dust is like numb.

International style and flowers, Political figures Lang Tao Sand.

The eyes are difficult to have the vulgar state.

Contemporary vassals are competing for votes, selling melons depends on their own boasting.

[Song Caixia Review] "Eight hundred" vernacular in the poem, the first couplet with "full of strange" and "messy like hemp" broke the question. In the middle, the "flowers" and "Langtao Sha" correspond to "international storm" and "political figures" in the middle of the same way; because the "vulgar state" and "victims", there are no cyan in their eyes, the hair is white and white, it is, it is, it is, it is, it is, it is, it is, it is, it is, it is white and white. The virtual place is written, considering the internal and external virtual reality in the inside and outside, and the confrontation is both stable and flexible. The tail federation expressed a strong personal emotions, and his emotions were deep, and he made a judgment, which expanded the poetic expansion. The spirit of this poem is full of the word "miscellaneous". Stabbing roses, enough.

Profile

Song Caixia, pseudonym: Xiaoyu. Amphibious poet. Member of the Chinese Writers Association, executive director of the Chinese Poetry Society, deputy editor of "Chinese Poetry". Vice President of Shandong Poetry Society. In his youth, Mr. Xia Chengzhang's Tianfeng Pavilion was the most enlightened, and then he also attacked new poems. Prose, reporting literature, new, and old -fashioned poems are suitable. Won the "Qilu Poetry Master" award, and was selected by the National Mainstream Media of China, CCTV, the Central People's Broadcasting Station, People's Daily, Guangming Daily, as one of the top ten most public influential poets in 2015. Published "Flames in Autumn", "White Rain Lulu Ci", "Selection of Song Caixia's Works" (Poetry Volume · Comment Volume) "Black Coffee", "Poetry List" and "Poetry Tide Blue".

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