Composition on the hall ｜ "Patriotic" is a topic of eternal vitality

Author:Yangcheng Evening News Yangche Time:2022.08.30

【Composition Questions】

"Patriotism is the core of our national spirit, and it is a spiritual bond of the unity and self -improvement of the Chinese nation." Countless patriotic dedication to purify people's hearts.

Youth is a poem. The eternal words show the desire for ideals, show the softness and masculinity of the artistic conception, show the depth and lofty soul, and interpret the infinite and tenaciousness of life.

Please write comprehensive material content and meaning to reflect your thinking, balance and choice.

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【Student practice】

In the era of standing, patriotism dedication

□ Lu Yuhan Guangzhou No. 16 Middle School Class (3) Class (3)

As a Chinese, patriotism is the deepest emotion flowing in the blood. The spirit of patriotism is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation and the enduring firm belief of the enduring. This spirit will accompany my growth and will eventually be implemented in my life.

"A large river wavy is a beautiful motherland and the place where I grow." In my mother's patriotic song, I opened historical books. I learned that in the dynasty more frequent ancient times, the patriotic dedication spirit was mostly manifested in the military officials. The vowing to donate to the literati and the literati to pass on the borrowing of a pen.

From Cao Zhi, who "donated a body to the country, depending on the death of death", to Li Bai, who was "sighing in the middle of the night, often worried about the big country"; from the "what can you do with the country, what can't you do?" Fan Zhongyan, who is worried and worries about the joy of the world "; from the" thinking of the year, the golden iron horses, swallowing thousands of miles like a tiger ", to Wen Tianxiang, who" who has no death since ancient times, leaves Dan's heart and shines "...

Whether it is a general or a civilian official, whether it is a pro -sofa or writing lyricism, it reflects the strong patriotic feelings and dedication spirit they show at the critical moment of the country.

When I grew up a little bit, as a little host, I was rising in the morning light of the five -star red flag and entered the history museum to study. I saw the patriotic dedication spirit presented in a more radical and exciting form.

Patriotic young students who made progress in the "May 4th" movement came forward, shouted their arms, and strived for sovereignty; in the new democratic revolution, tens of thousands of patriotic revolutionaries, when the motherland was in danger, walked bravely on the front line of the revolution. , Use the flesh -and -blood body to guard the Great Wall of Miles of the motherland and protect the great riverside of the motherland with life.

As the so -called "clean -ups and mountains, all the people are the masters", the soldiers who are sacrificed by the country are not afraid of obstruction, no fear of sacrifice, and the patriotic dedication of "instead of humiliating life, not to report to the country".

When the red scarf on the chest became a group emblem, when I walked into the historical class, I saw it from the film and textbooks. After the founding of the New China, the patriotic dedication was manifested in the hard work of the older generations. It is manifested in their unremitting struggle for the construction of the motherland.

In Daqing Oilfield, there are "iron men" Wang Jinxi and countless workers who work in the dark night; on the road of rural reform, there are Jiao Yulu and thousands of busy figures like him day and night; "Two bombs, one star star The success of "Oriental Red" cannot be separated from scientists such as Qian Xuesen, and the dedication of the dedication of studying at night with no fame and fortune.

It is them who dedicated their lives to the motherland, and we have the prosperity we see now.

When I participated in volunteer activities, stood seriously for garbage classification, actively publicized for anti -drug work, worked hard for urban greening and cleaning, and sent clothes and books for children in the mountains. The spirit of patriotism dedication is more embodied in the bits and pieces around us.

"Clear love is only for China." The little soldiers on the edge of Wei Guo built the monument of the motherland with steel -like flesh and blood; , Set up an invisible barrier to protect the safety of the people and health; in the turbulent floods, rescue soldiers and volunteers used the whitening limbs in the water, creating a copper wall iron wall that is isolated in crisis.

In them, we saw perseverance and solidarity, and we saw patriotism and dedication.

This is the patriotic dedication spirit of the new era. It is simple, ordinary, great, and lofty. It serves the people, guards the country, and takes up the responsibility of the country. In the end, it will lay a firm foundation for the realization of the Chinese dream.

I deeply feel that patriotism is the dedication of the Chinese people who grew up in Sri Land and about the unity of national unity. Planting forward.

These two constitute the connotation and significance of patriotism's dedication, inspiring Chinese children to be preparing to fight for this nation and era.

A petal flower, a grass, one wood, a star, a star, a sea, a Wangquan, a river, and a pond lake are closely related to every Chinese. The spirit of the patriotic dedication, shouldering the rejuvenation of China, in the torrent of the times, and based on the new era of China, we must be unwavering, dedicate patriotism, and be with the country.

【Teacher Comments】

"Patriotic" is a long -lasting but eternal topic. The Chinese nation has no shortage of patriotism since ancient times. Therefore, the material of this article is a highlight.

The author ranges from his mother's patriotic small song, from the celebrity story read, from his own hosting flag -raising ceremony to participating in volunteers, and finally to the deeds of the guardian guards, the context clearly tells his understanding of "patriotic" emotions, and This perception is continuously deepening with growth. Patriotism can be the dedication of the country's critical moment. Patriotism can also be a bit of peaceful age. As long as you use action to dedicate your strength to the motherland, it is patriotism.

The full text is very grounded, but there is no lack of literary talents. The ending is sublimated the theme and responded to the topic. Shouldn't we tell the story of Chinese stories?

(Liang Qiuyan, a senior Chinese teacher in Guangzhou No. 16 Middle School)

【Non -Teacher Comments】

Lu's composition language is smooth and clear, and it is an excellent composition of middle school students. But discerningly, such a topic is routine. Because this topic has been done for decades, leaving many excellent chapters and ready -made views.

What I look forward to is the most true life experience of the classmate Lu. In other words, I hope to have more personalized expression.

"The original knowing everything, but the grief did not see Kyushu. Wang Shibei Ding Central Plains Day, the family sacrifice did not forget Nai Weng." Lu You's poem was singing eternal, and he expressed his patriotic emotional. The yin and yang are separated, and the original and the world are broken, but even if they fall into the overcast, the poet's expectations are still strong.

Such a seemingly unusual description is true and strong, but also patriotic feelings. I very much hope that the composition of middle school students can also be like this. From a tiny thing, start with ripple -like moods, strive to personalize, and strive to have a small feeling of individual life in front of big themes.

I think that in -depth expression of grand themes and personalizing the experience of life, this is the higher state pursuit of the current student composition.

(Jiang Bing, President of Guangzhou Lingnan Cultural Research Association and professor of Guangdong University of Finance and Economics)

The original text was published in "Yangcheng Evening News" August 29, 2022