Others write golden sentences, do you write nonsense?The method of refining the sentence is wrong!

Source | Chinese Rong Media Cloud

Author | Yao Gannan

I always sigh that the articles of others are frequent, and their views are dazzling, but when it is my turn, I ca n’t say a word for a long time.

The golden sentence you wrote, what are you writing nonsense, where is the problem? What are the ways to write golden sentences?

Today, tea tea shares the following articles. The article proposes 4 ways to refine sentences to help you write golden sentences.

When we read some articles, we often find some "golden sentences", and they can't help but make a case.

For example, when reading Liu Yuxi's "Bad Room", we remembered that "the mountain is not high, there is a immortal name. Water is not deep, there is a dragon and spirit."

When reading Fan Zhongyan's "Yueyang Tower", we remembered the sentences that "do not be happy with things, do not be sad", "worry about the sorrow of the world, and the joy of the world".

When reading Zhuge Liang's "The Book of Commandments", we remembered sentences such as "quietly self -cultivation, frugality to nourish morality" and he quoted "non -indifferent and unknown ambitions, non -tranquility and far away".

When reading the communication "The Example of the Secretary of the County Party Committee -Jiao Yulu", we remembered the sentences such as "the power of eating others chewed" and "the power of the role model is endless".

When reading the communication "The Good Solder of Chairman Mao -Lei Feng", we remembered the sentence "Alive is to make others a better life" ...

In an article, there is a highlight of the golden sentence, with the soul, with the meaning of the alarm, it can make people think, move people, work hard, and work hard. Therefore, when writing an article, you should carefully arrange the design and work hard to write the golden sentence.

The author believes that there are 4 ways to write golden sentences in the article. May wish to go and try it.

Road 1: Quote

Quote, this is the most convenient and faster method. The ancient and modern Chinese and foreign philosophers left a lot of precious spiritual wealth, including the golden sentences they wrote. These golden sentences are popular, long, and widely spread. Some of them have become idioms, some become proverbs, and many of them have become daily words.

The main features of these golden sentences are: conciseness, good memory, and profound meaning. To quote this sentence in the article, you must first know it and read it. Many books such as Dictionary Dictionary have been published now. You can choose a few books and read it. After having an impression, it is convenient to quote.

When reading other books and articles, you can focus on the golden sentences you see, and prepare for the future citation.

When quoting the golden sentences of others, we must closely combine the content of the article you wrote. The closer the combination, the more convincing the article.

The phrase "non -indifferent and nobles, no peace and no distance" in Zhuge Liang's "The Book of the Commandment" is a paragraph in the Han Dynasty Liu An's "Huainanzi · Main Surgery Training". The original words were: "Therefore, it is not thin and clear, non -tranquility and no far away, non -generous and unreasonable, non -compassion and nobleness, non -flattering." Due to good citation, future generations I thought "indifferent to Mingzhi, quiet and far away" was said to Zhuge Liang.

The second way: imitate

Imitation is also learning and improvement. Many variety shows now have imitation shows, each with its own characteristics. The imitation and references of the golden sentences in the article are different. When quoting, the original words are used. It can be used in some original words when imitation.

One of the writers of writing saw a famous celebrity saying: "Every day when you never dance, it is a disappointment of life." He had a clever move and imitated his own golden sentence: "Every day when you never write is to life. Ferry. "

One author reads such a golden sentence: "If you lose the direction, then all the wind blowing is against the wind." He thinks it is very philosophical. So he wrote his own golden sentence based on the structure of "if ... then ...": "If you lose your enthusiasm, then all the roads will be difficult."

Although imitation is not as good as original, it is also possible to imitate.

Third Road: Capture

In a face -to -face interview with people, sometimes I can hear some very philosophical words. At this time, it is necessary to quickly capture it and express it in more refined language. Some cadres go deep into the front line, hear some reflections of the masses, and write down these feelings:

In the face of the people, every party member and cadre must leave the stools, get off the shelf, spread their bodies, and get out of the heart.

The guests' home, visiting Wanhu Village, the village heads, the home, the ground said, the buns know the warmth, and the stove is rich in poverty.

Qingqing's throat, making the "good voice" that the masses love to hear; in the mirror, the "good image" of the masses is up to the masses; take a bath, remove the "bad problems" of the masses' disgust; ability".

These sentences, vivid images, are the requirements of the masses to cadres and organize them, which has realistic educational significance.

Before the interview, pay attention to the idea of ​​paying attention to the golden sentence. This advanced consciousness is an effective way to succeed. It is successful to capture one or two golden sentences in an interview activity, and there is no need to be greedy.

Road 4: Original

The original golden sentence is not easy. This is the flash of the creator's thoughts, the crystallization of inspiration and wisdom, and the sublimation of language condensation. The original foundation is to read a lot of celebrities and famous sentences, merge into my mind, and think about their own cognition after thinking.

There are many famous celebrities, and the author likes a lot. In the aspect of "reading", the following 6:

Du Fu: "Reading through thousands of volumes, writing as a god."

Yan Zhenqing: "I do n’t know how to learn from diligence in black hair, and Bai Shifang regrets reading late."

Zhu Zhiyu: "If you don't read it for three days, you feel that the language is tasteless." Descartes; "Read a good book, just like talking to the best people in the past."

Mao Zedong: "The rice can not be eaten for a month, you can not sleep for a day, and you can't read the book for a day."

Zhou Enlai: "Reading for the rise of China."

Starting from collecting golden sentences, first understand it, then imitate it, and then reach the point of originality. There are many specific methods of the original golden sentences, including the method of fighting, rhyme, analogy, rowing method, questioning method, etc., but in the final analysis, there must be deep thoughts.

When Lu Xun created "Hengmeng coldly to Qianfu, bowing his head as a bull", he expressed his hatred and love for the enemy.

When Edison wrote that "genius is one percent of inspiration plus 99 percent of sweat", it was the crystallization of his hard work to do experiments.

Creating golden sentences is not to play text games. We must have the correct way of thinking, and have positions and viewpoints. Only by continuously improving cognitive capabilities and building a cognitive system, can we write a satisfactory golden sentence for the world, life, and value.

"Although there are thousands of hardships, they have started to get gold." This is the case for gold rush, and the same is true for writing golden sentences. The golden sentence is like a bright gem, inlaid in your article, it makes your article sparkling and dazzling!

Author: Yao Gannan, director of the original training department of the People's Daily Overseas Edition

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