Nothing!Who loves to read the manuscript of Qing Tang?

Source | Chinese Rong Media Cloud

Author | Liu Guochang

There are no stories in writing communication and close -ups. What do you want to see for readers? There are no details in the story, no interest, how can readers read?

What should I write if they want to write characters, stories, details, and fun? Let's take a look at the following examples and learn from it.

1. The essential element of news manuscripts

In fact, some "four no" (no character, no story, no details, no fun) manuscripts do exist in some media. Although not many, it should also attract the attention of reporters.

Characters, stories, details, and fun, this is the four essential elements of news manuscripts (here to write and communicate). When a mature reporter wrote a manuscript, most of them worked hard on these four elements. Because they know that if there are no or lack of these four elements in the manuscript, it will not be able to form a manuscript.

Why? This is determined by the characteristics of news manuscripts.

News manuscripts are different from literary works and other manuscripts. A major feature of this type of manuscript is that it is strong.

News is a new fact report. When we write a message, we all know that the news elements: time, place, character, things, processes, reasons, etc. are all written. When we write close -up and communication, we must also write the factors, stories, details, and fun. Only in this way can the manuscript have the characteristics of news.

One of the reasons why the manuscript has the "four no" problems is that he has not yet aware of the characteristics of news manuscripts. Therefore, in the future writing, reporters need to further strengthen this consciousness.

2. How to write the manuscript of "Four You"

From the "four" to the "four", that is, the manuscript must be "character, stories, details, and interesting", not easy. But it is difficult to work hard.

One said "some figures".

Characters are the subject of news. This character is a specific character, such as Zhang San, Li Si, Wang Wu, etc. If you have a name and a surname, a man is a woman. What the industry must be clearly explained.

In some manuscripts, "no characters" are not that there is no name related to news in the manuscript, but that they do not describe and portray this person as a "character".

For example, when some manuscripts are introduced by people and things, they always like to write in the tone of a third person, "How do he ..." "What do he do ..." "What did he do ..." and "why This is not enough to excavate the content, so that it has not left any impression.

In an interview with the characters, the characters written are undoubtedly the "protagonist". Then you need to spend some pen and ink to describe and portray this character. From the characteristics of the appearance to the talk, from the work to the mental state, etc., you need to consider carefully and strive to write "this one" (German philosopher Hegel terminology, refers to the specific and determined object that the official perceives, in aesthetic science Extended to specific, individual typical image).

In a report entitled "The Fragrance Struggler Group Struggle Group" (June 20, 2019), the reporter wrote the old railway soldier Zhang Shenglin. The article wrote: "Zhang Shenglin is 62 years old, and his back is a little bit. It is the root cause of the disease that fell when repairing the tunnel. His eyes narrowed, but when he talked about the past, he immediately flashed; Standard sitting posture ... "

These texts are vividly described and specific.

Work communication and style communication focuses on "writing things", but the situation of relevant people also needs to be clearly explained, so that readers have a complete understanding.

The second says "there is a story".

In a sense, writing news is writing stories.

The story must be conflict, transformation, and change. When writing a manuscript, pay attention to collecting and organizing materials in this area. There are not this manuscript. It is said that things are straightforward. There is no comparison in front and back. There is no wave of waves.

An introduction of the manuscript of the development of research tourism in Gutian Village, Jinggangshan, Jiangxi, written in storytelling, is unique:

In 2018, Zhang Yurong was invited by the villagers to return to the village and elected the village secretary. "Genzi still has no money. Only by doing industries can there be a way out." It didn't take long for Zhang Yurong to visit Xie Yanjun, a villager who made red education and training in Jinggangshan. The two discussed several times and pondered a way -do research tourism!

"With the signboard of 'Jinggangshan', Xie Yanjun has ready -made customers, and the village entrance can be on the high speed. The red research market is vast. I do n’t believe that the life is good." The research projects have been seen almost everywhere, and the research projects run by Jinggangshan have been touched by me. "

But for the villagers, "study tourism" is a new word. In order to dispel the concerns of everyone, Zhang Yurong and Xie Yanjun rented two buses at their own expense, and pulled more than 80 people in the village to Xiaqi Village and Xiamutang Village, which developed research tourism in Jinggangshan to see changes and income. This time the villagers have the bottom of their hearts, and the project of Gutian Village has been running smoothly.

Of course, it is not that every manuscript must write a story, depending on the specific situation. But some facts have a certain story in themselves, but some reporters have ignored it. A straightforward narrative is written, which is wrong.

Three said "with details".

The details are the smallest unit in the news facts, but it has a great role. A vivid details make people unforgettable; a specific details impress the readers' hearts. Experienced reporters are very important to collect these details during interviews. For example, the draft of "Guizhou" Solution ", the details written are impressed by people:

"The Miao mother Anmeizhen's family has only 3 bowls. It has been broken for 5 days." 29 years ago, an internal reference was shocked in Beijing. The remote village, thereby starting the Jedi counterattack of poverty alleviation and poverty alleviation. In the past 29 years, An Meizhen was 92 years old, three rooms in Liangliang, and the pots of pots were full. The per capita income of the village increased from 33 yuan to 5,460 yuan, and the forest coverage rate rose from 5%to 70.4%.

Li Zhuang, the original editor of the People's Daily, is a master of writing a communication. He once said that there are details that there are details in writing communication, but there must be a lot of details, but there must be. In my opinion, at least there are at least two or three flash details.

This is indeed an experience. It is worth remembering.

Four said "fun".

Interesting people, everyone likes it; interesting articles, everyone naturally loves to read.

Writing the manuscript is fun. The first person and the thing to write are interesting. The second is that when the reporter writes the manuscript, do not do it. Try to write the manuscript as fun and taste.

"Have you heard of the" Bird Pond "? A pond, a few tree stumps, and the dead tree caves of the tree stump put on the bread insects that birds love to eat ..."

The above is the beginning of the article "Advanced by local conditions, go to the road of getting rich", it is a bit interesting!

"Yang Yong, the captain of the service team and the deputy director of the Jinan City Urban and Rural Transportation Bureau, Yang Yong raised the newspaper in his hand ... Yang Shumin was also sitting in the among resident representatives, holding paper and pen in his hand, and inserting it from time to time ..."

The above is the text of "Xingjiaxu Village", vivid! Write all people's actions.

Summary

Overcoming the problem of "four no", writing the manuscript "Four" is not just a question of writing. It involves a series of links such as whether the interview is meticulous, whether the concept is exquisite, and whether the details are in place. As a reporter, when you have more minds in these aspects, move your mind more, and strive to write the manuscripts vivid, vivid, loving, and achieve the best communication effect.

Author: Liu Guochang, former deputy editor of senior editor and People's Daily Overseas Edition

Original title: No one is willing to read the manuscript of "Four No"

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