[Master's Evaluation Poetry] Song Caixia: Bai Yulu Saying Poetry · Episode 40

[Yun Fan Read Reading] Bai Yulu Says Poetry · Episode 40

Xiangxiangzi

Cao Hui

The faint feelings are deep, the wind is too much. Sometimes, falseness is true. Drunk words, new green soul. In front of the window, the characters in the screen, and the pillow.

Fibrous willow, Su Su Jingmen, Tianya Road, spoil Guangyin. With a smile, he did not quit greed. Continue long acacia, jade butterfly, painting hall spring.

[Comment] This is the first affectionate work. It is quite subtle with the eight characters of "faint love, the wind is passing without trace", which is quite subtle. Who who is pregnant answers the "front moon, the characters in the screen, the person in the pillow", and feel unlimited. The end of the last film is made in three words "Renewal of Long Acacia, Jade Butterfly, Painting Hall Spring". The two sides are locked, Gao Huawanli, naturally, it can be called a good sentence.

Morning Reading in Summer

Wang Jiquan

The wind is most gentle in the morning, and I put gentleness into the building.

Only the way is gentle to relieve the heat, who knows to hide in the poem.

[Comment] All vernacular, there is no obscure word, you can understand at a glance, but clever, read to taste, "gentle" repeated three times, aggravating the tone, and the gentleness of the wind? Or is it gentle? Prepare a grid and sway the readers as much as possible.

Deng Jiaxiange

Zhou Xiaotian

Yan Huang's descendants ran for 800 million, and did not steam the steamed buns. Lop Nur's artillery battles, to accompany the United States and Su to play bloggers. No one is not good at the wedding, what is the wife who is a high -festive wife! I don't envy Tongmen Zhenliu, and they are named in front of people. How can I repair my life? I do n’t know the three meals. Seven six, five, five, three, and Taihua took this. Mushroom clouds rose to Gobi, and Fengze Garden was not sleeping at night. Zhou made his eyebrows open, and Yang Zi shed tears. Unfortunately, the micro -room is lost, and the years of absurdity are fearless. Pan Duo pulled the umbrella without opening, and a centurion was pursuing. Shennong tasted the grass to poison, and he will cast a sword and try it. One thing is in the palm of the country, and the countdown to teach the English years. Public and public like mountains, how can people replace it! The outside disease is critical at the same time, and the world knows the state -owned scholars at the same time. The guests in front of the door folded, and the indoor wife and children dangled secretly. The two bombs Yuanxun recommended the blood, and the name was the ancient. The heavens have long -lasting, and there is no hate, and life has been doing a big thing!

[Comment] This "Deng Jiaxian Song" is a masterpiece of Professor Zhou Xiaotian who won the Lu Xun Literature Award. He has won the first prize of the Fifth Huaxia Poetry Award. This is a narrative poem in the new era. It can also be regarded as "history of poetry".

The whole poem is full of breath, the structure is close, the structure is compact, and the reading is touching. Although most of the allusions, they have degraded the greatest extent. Some new words are not available in ancient poems, such as "countdown", "outside" and "two bombs", etc., which are closely related to characters and themes and are full of sense of expression. The most remarkable thing is the two sentences "Shen Nong tasted grass and tested the sword and tried it". , It can be described as heavy. The previous sentence means that Deng Jia first has the spirit of Shennong taste grass, but there is no luck of Shennong; the latter sentence means that Deng Jiaxian "casts swords" for the country, and trying the sword like a man, as if it was a fate. These two sentences are very tragedy and are the poems of the whole poem. "The outside world is in danger at the same time, and the world knows the state -owned scholars at the same time." Wang Meng said in the recording of Zhou Xiaotian's "Deng Jiaxian Song": "These two sentences are like thunder and electricity, deafening! There are tears in it! "Cheng Shi said. I read "Deng Jiaxian Ge". The language in the poem is based on modern written language. It is used as the two aspects of spoken language and classical Chinese. It is just right to use the code. It is a comprehensive manifestation of poets' emotions, and those who are not powerful cannot do it.

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Song Caixia, a member of the Chinese Writers Association, deputy editor -in -chief of "Chinese Poetry". In his youth, Mr. Xia Chengzhang's Tianfeng Pavilion was the most enlightened, and then he also attacked new poems. Zeng asked Mr. Zhou Duwen and Mr. Shen Tianhong, which benefited at most. Published in the 1980s. Publishing prose collection, poetry collection, poetry review collection, and new collection of poems "Dare to borrow a branch for Dan Xin", "Song Caixia's Works Selection" (Poetry Volume · Comment Volume) "Poetry Science Project" and "Poetry Tide Blue" new poem collection "Black Black" Coffee "and so on.

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